Frost Edge Crusader/RATE PLEASE

[Zen-Psi]

he will be a series of cards

 

Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Warrior-type Monster in your graveyard from play.At the beginning of next turn you can Special Summon a Warrior-Type card removed from play in attack position.If this card is chosen as a ATK target switch the target to the Special Summoned monster on your side of the field.When destroyed, inflict the damage difference to your opponents Life Points.This effect can only be used once per summon.

So what do you think?

Rate/comment please

[ragnarok1945]

capitalization errors. Plus the first sentence you mean Normal Summoned

 

warrior type should be Warrior-Type

 

for the last sentence I'd also keep it slightly more frequent than just once per duel

 

7.7/10

[Zen-Psi]

Okay fixed it now,it should be better.

[Shocked]

Fixed OCG :

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. At the beginning of next turn, you can Special Summon a Warrior-Type card removed from play in Attack Position. If this card is chosen as a ATK target, switch the target to the Special Summoned monster on your side of the field. When destroyed, inflict the damage difference to your opponents Life Points. This effect can only be used once per Summon.

 

Terrible OCG. Use capital words. And add space after commas and dots.

 

5/10

[Zen-Psi]

edited

[ragnarok1945]

Okay fixed it now' date='it should be better.

[/quote']

 

It is an improvement, I'll agree with that, so I'll raise my rate to 8.4/10