◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 This monster cannot normal summoned, special summoned or set. This monster can only be special summoned by offering 3 "Spacecraft" monsters. Put 3 "Space" counters and 3 "Beam" counters on this card. By removing 1 "Space" counter you can special summon 1 "Space" monster to your side of the field. By removing 1 "Beam" counter destroy 1 monster on your opponents side of the field. By removing 3 "Beam" counters you can either special summon 1 "Big Ray Spaceship" or you may destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field. By removing 3 "Space" counters you may summon "Spacecraft #1, Spacecraft #2, Spacecraft #3, and Spacecraft #4 to your side of the field. When all counters are removed from this card destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Each has their own problems. Go through them, carefully, and try to solve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 i dont see anything wrong with any of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Well, I can account for grammar, OCG, fuzzy pictures, abuse in real play, etc... etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 I have no fuzzy pictures if so its your computer......my effects are perfectly fine and nothing is overpowered......so sir not to be rude, but you are a victim of criticism. And my grammer is perfect i went over them 5 times just to be sure. I understand if it is commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 I'm going to only do the first card, mmk? Capitalize all forms of summoning. LIGHT should look like that, it's an attribute. space between words/commas/periods. Use pictures where you see the card, not the glare. Its effect says it can't be summoned, period. Don't make every card that's powerful twelve stars, reserve for gods, BEUTD, DMK, etc. By the way, it's spelled g-r-a-m-m-a-r. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Im sorry.....im a newb also Ooc i feel like this is dejavu like i saw this beforeO_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Really? You're a noob? I never would have guessed... Anyway, you can't use that excuse, because This exists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Heh ummmm yeah about that. I never looked at that.^^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Might be a good idea to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 All right. By the way just wanted to say, Thanks for so much put down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 I wasn't trying to be like that, I just don't like it when people think there cards are all that when they aren't. Y'know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 i dont think my cards are all that at all. As a matter of fact these are just some of my basic thoughts. i really think they could be so so much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 xD nice use of the "throw" Darkthorne YugiohPro, the point of posting your cards up here is to get help on them... So if you're going to be so stubborn as to not accept criticism, don't post your cards in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 geez sorry sir. i do want help i was just making my point. See people have been giving me a lot of problems on here lately. And my real life deck a guy made fun of me and said, "And you call yourself yugioh"PRO" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 You gotta stand up for a fancy name. You might talk the talk, but you gotta walk the walk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coppapoopy Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 well! i think these cards that you made are awesome. I think the other guy that criticising you because he is jealous that he can't make cards that are as good as the ones you made!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Thanx dude. At least someone is kind and not a super criticizer.(No offense) Other then grammer errors theyre really good cards. I have cards that work for them i just havent put them down on here yet. Plus i really dont think ill ever be able to stand up for my name. No matter if i made the greatest card in the world and it was perfect, id still get criticized and i know it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Some grammar problems, but not too bad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 They're good ideas. Don't worry about the criticism. It makes you better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 thank you everyone=D i will listen to your advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 lol, looks like you have already got into a rambling fight with darkthrone, anywhom, yeah some thing needs to be fixed, which a link was givien to help you with =) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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