Goddess of the Final Morning

[RoxasReaper]

Here is one of my newest cards, i dont know if it is exactly balanced enough to be in here but thats why im posting it, to get a second opinion, anyway here it is, tell me what you think, any changes you think would be good for it, dont hesitate to tell me.

 

[T3RA PROWL3R]

I've seen this pic a BUNCH of times before. Show the lore of the card below the pic of the card. Not very balanced; just a tad.

 

How about:

When this card is Special Summoned, return all cards on the Field to their owner's Hand. This card cannot attack during the turn it is summoned.

 

Fixed OCG. Just "Summoned" is too splashable. It would make more sense to have it be Special Summoned. If you destroy all Spell and Trap cards, your opponent wouldn't be able to do anything to "Fo-sho" counter this card.

[RoxasReaper]

I've seen this pic a BUNCH of times before. Show the lore of the card below the pic of the card. Not very balanced; just a tad.

 

How about:

When this card is Special Summoned' date=' return all cards on the Field to their owner's Hand. This card cannot attack during the turn it is summoned.

 

Fixed OCG. Just "Summoned" is too splashable. It would make more sense to have it be Special Summoned. If you destroy all Spell and Trap cards, your opponent wouldn't be able to do anything to "Fo-sho" counter this card.

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alrighty then man, thanks for the help

[ragnarok1945]

change summoned to Summoned

 

in addition at 3500 atk this card need specific summoning conditions

 

magic and trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards

 

it's also boring for having no effect while on the field

 

6/10

[RoxasReaper]

change summoned to Summoned

 

in addition at 3500 atk this card need specific summoning conditions

 

magic and trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards

 

it's also boring for having no effect while on the field

 

6/10

 

again ok ill change those things about it, but only a 6, c'mon lol

[DARKPLANT RISING]

change summoned to Summoned

 

in addition at 3500 atk this card need specific summoning conditions

 

magic and trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards

 

it's also boring for having no effect while on the field

 

6/10

 

again ok ill change those things about it' date=' but only a 6, c'mon lol

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A true card maker would see that as "I can improve myself by 4 if I do my best".

 

The OCG and Overused Pics are bad. Use DeviantART or Magic Deck Vortex. You could use Skill Drain after summoning to have an auto-direct. 7/10

 

P.S. So your name is Bryce Rangitsch?

[RoxasReaper]

change summoned to Summoned

 

in addition at 3500 atk this card need specific summoning conditions

 

magic and trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards

 

it's also boring for having no effect while on the field

 

6/10

 

again ok ill change those things about it' date=' but only a 6, c'mon lol

[/quote']

 

A true card maker would see that as "I can improve myself by 4 if I do my best".

 

The OCG and Overused Pics are bad. Use DeviantART or Magic Deck Vortex. You could use Skill Drain after summoning to have an auto-direct. 7/10

 

P.S. So your name is Bryce Rangitsch?

 

I would love to be a better card maker but there isnt anyway to get the art from my head onto papy or into the computer, im a crappy artist, so i use pics off the internet, and yes my name is Bryce Rangitsch, i know i hate my name too, i didnt choose it

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change summoned to Summoned

 

in addition at 3500 atk this card need specific summoning conditions

 

magic and trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards

 

it's also boring for having no effect while on the field

 

6/10

 

again ok ill change those things about it' date=' but only a 6, c'mon lol

[/quote']

 

A true card maker would see that as "I can improve myself by 4 if I do my best".

 

The OCG and Overused Pics are bad. Use DeviantART or Magic Deck Vortex. You could use Skill Drain after summoning to have an auto-direct. 7/10

 

P.S. So your name is Bryce Rangitsch?

 

I would love to be a better card maker but there isnt anyway to get the art from my head onto papy or into the computer, im a crappy artist, so i use pics off the internet, and yes my name is Bryce Rangitsch, i know i hate my name too, i didnt choose it

[RoxasReaper]

bump