Xp11708 Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 This is my second card which i made. It took me a looooooong time for me to find this picture, hope u like it.:D:)P.S. There might be a card call 'Fire Soucerer'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 1. OCG errors. I don't feel like correcting atm.....2. Looks like megaman.... And I hate pictures without backgrounds.3. *Sorcerer2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Picture: 0/10. OCG: 2/10. Total: 1.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 -Do you mean "Fire Sorcerer"?-Image could be better "eg. with a background"-Fire is an Attribute, not a Type. IMO, it should be a Pyro-Type.-OCG errors. For example, when do this effect activate: When the card is Summoned? Once during your Main phase? Please be more specific.-Effect is a bit dull. IMO, it should have an effect of inflicting damage, since that is what most FIRE monsters have.-Can't complain about the points. They're fair for its effect. Overall, it does need some adjustments. Also, read the other comments so you can improve this card even more. 3.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ash_202457 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 1. OCG errors. I don't feel like correcting atm.....2. Looks like megaman.... And I hate pictures without backgrounds.3. *Sorcerer2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gluttony King Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 -Do you mean "Fire Sorcerer"?-Image could be better "eg. with a background"-Fire is an Attribute' date=' not a Type. IMO, it should be a Pyro-Type.-OCG errors. For example, when do this effect activate: When the card is Summoned? Once during your Main phase? Please be more specific.-Effect is a bit dull. IMO, it should have an effect of inflicting damage, since that is what most FIRE monsters have.-Can't complain about the points. They're fair for its effect. Overall, it does need some adjustments. Also, read the other comments so you can improve this card even more. 3.5/10.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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