My first spell card

[Zen-Psi]

This is my first spell card I made so far.Pic complements from Darksiders game.

 

EFFECT:Pay 1200 Life Points.Only activate when your opponent has 2 more monsters on his/her side of the field.Increase the ATK of a monster on your side of the field by 800 for each monster on opponent's side of the field.That monster can attack twice during a Battle Phase,no Battle damage is dealt when monster is destroyed.When that monster is destroyed ,destroy this card instead.

 

RATE/HATE/COMMENT PLEASE

[Guest Neo Fusion]

spaces between punctuations are needed :/

Increase the attack=Increase the ATK

on opponent's side of the field-put your in front of opponent's

in a Battle Phase-during the Battle Phase

hope this helps

[Zen-Psi]

Thanks for the help,i fixed some of the errors

[ragnarok1945]

so it's a little bit like United We Stand, just using your opponent's monsters instead

 

that makes it balanced more for the atk gain, but the double attack during the Battle Phase makes it OPed, you should say if you use that effect it can't do battle damage

 

7.9/10

[Recteik Shade]

I think it needs a little work but not much. I see what it would be used for ,getting rid of your opponents big monsters, but i agree with Ragnarock make it so no battle Damage is taken. plus if your gonna use that effect destrot this card to keep the monster on the feild make it an Equip Spell card.

8.3/10