jamora Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 [spoiler=LV 3]When this monster declares an attack and the opposing monster is a Fiend-Type or DARK monster, that monster is immediately destroyed. remove this monster from play to Special Summon "Chaos Eater LV 5" to the field in face-up attack position. [spoiler=LV 5]If Special Summoned by "Chaos Eater LV 3" Effect, Send your hand to then Graveyard and choose 5 Fiend-Type or DARK monster from your opponents Deck and send them to their graveyard. Remove this monster from play to Special Summon "Chaos Eater LV 8" to the field in Face-Up attack position. [spoiler=LV 8] If Special Summoned by "Chaos Eater LV 5" Effect, Destroy all cards on the field. Remove this monster from play after battle circulation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piconoe Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 'destroyed. remove this monster' - Capitalize Remove.When summoning the next form, list where they are allowed to summon the monster from. Example: Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8 'Special Summon "Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8" from your hand or deck.'Fix other OCG errors such as with LV3's 'destroy a Fiend/DARK' effect (look at Ally of Justice Catastor for reference).I'm naturally harsh on any and all LV monsters, seeing as it IS my archetype, and the summoning conditions aren't as strict as the real ones, and don't seem to flow as well. 3/10. Because they aren't OP if you fix the level up system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 cool thx ill do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 What the funk is "battle circulation"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piconoe Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 When this monster attacks a Fiend-type or DARK monster, destroy it without applying damage calculation. [insert Level Up Condition Here] If this monster is Special Summoned by the effect of "Chaos Eater LV 3", send your hand to the graveyard and look at your opponent's deck. Select up to the same number of Fiend-type or DARK monsters and send them to the graveyard. [insert Level Up Condition Here] If this monster is Special Summoned by the effect of "Chaos Eater LV 5", destroy all cards on the field. Remove this monster from play during your End Phase. Just suggestions. Edited LV5 effect to be more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 lv8's effect is too boring, it needs another one furthermore, lv8 is too powerful if it can be summoned normally. Yes it has no effects that way, but you still should have said you can only summon it via lv5's effect OCG errors have been pointed out already, so I'll give this 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Ok thank ya thank ya thank ya :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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