Need some help on this Jellyfish

[Lexadin]

[align=center]Well I wasn't really planning on making another thread besides my celebration one, but I think I need some help on the OCG of this card.

After it will be fixed. I will add it to my set.

So here is the

Protector of the Abandoned

Each time your opponent sends a card(s) from his/her hand or Deck to the Graveyard due to the effect of a card controlled by your opponent, you can add 1 of the discarded cards to your hand.

Pic from Pixiv.

 

So I would apriciate it if someone would fix this.[/align]

Rate/hate/but at least try to fix

[FSBolthof]

Every thing is good and I like the card but the 'a' should be made into '(a)', because it can be plural

9/10

[Lexadin]

Thanks, I will update it when all comments have arived, couse you may have missed a thing.

[Cloister]

See no errors on it.

The effect can be strong if they want some powerful monsters to their Grave.

Good anti LS imo..

But then again, LS rely on sending cards from the Deck to the Grave, and not the hand. But since it has low ATK and DEF I feel it is UPed, might wanna give it 1000 ATK instead of 500 or more DEF, not too much though. Like the effect.

Don't really know how to rate it but a 8/10 I think it will be...

I wouldn't use this, but there might be people who would.

[Lexadin]

Thanks, yeah I didn't really knew if it would be Op or UP, couse you'll never know what you will meet.

Nice to see you again tom.

[Cloister]

I wont be here anything tomorrow, but from thursday and on I think I can be here at least once per day. I hope.

[Lexadin]

Maybe, and even if not so, everyone can understand it.

[Cloister]

Maybe' date=' and even if not so, everyone can understand it.

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Ehh... what?

[-Griffin]

Eh... seems too situational and relies on your opponent to run cards they may not. There are better sides to LS and DW/Fableds, so I don't see where it could be run.

[DDevil27]

needs more ATK points, the effect is cool

only one error: effect- Effect

[Lexadin]

@ Tom: Idk, I just sometimes say random things.

@-Griffin: Idk, maybe it will work with some kind of strategy.

@DDevil27: Yeah, I might do that.

[Cloister]

effect should not be capitalized

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

Probably best on Lightsworn and Zombie. Pretty balanced (maybe slightly Up'ed), although unless there is support, it would be hard to keep on the field with such low stats. Maybe slightly higher stats if no support, say 1100 ATK/ 900 DEF. Flawless OCG though.

 

8.7/10

[Lexadin]

Thanks, I will probebly rease its stats a bit.

[ragnarok1945]

it can get OPed since you didn't specify any cards

 

so too powerful means too huge an advantage to you. So for monster cards, I'd put a level limit on it or something to balance it better

 

9/10

[Lexadin]

Really, becouse I thought that it would be ballanced becouse its really situational. If your opponent uses something like a burn deck you would be screwedrived.

[-Griffin]

If your opponent uses anything other than Fabled/LS/DW, you're screwed, and I've already mentioned that there's better sides vs them.

[crocruler]

i agree with the thing about being situational. good ocg by the way.

 

8/10