review my card?

[Specter54]

Hey, my friend was talking about how he got some feedback from other users about some of his cards, and I've got a lot of cards, so I though it would be a good idea to see what other people thought of some of them. I was just wondering what people thought of this one, so if you just said what you think of it, that'd be cool.

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By the way, here's the card lore:

Dragon/Effect

This card returns to its owner's hand at the start of every Battle Phase, even if it is Set face-down. Tribute this card and select one face-up Dragon-Type Monster on your side of the field. If that card is used for a Ritual Summon, Synchro Summon, or Fusion Summon, it can be used as all necessary monsters needed for that summon, ignoring all the summining conditions. Your opponent cannot negate this effect or the summon using the selected monster.

[Aero~]

If this card was to be Set, you must reveal it to your opponent first. At the start of every Battle Phase, this card returns to your hand., even if it is face-down. You can select 1 Dragon-Type Monster on the field. If the selected monster was to be Tributed for a Ritual Summon, you can treat it's level as the Ritual Monster's level. If the selected monster would be used as a Fusion Material Monster, you can treat it as all monsters neccisary for the Fusion Summon of the Fusion Monster.

 

LQ pic.

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

picture is a bit blurry

 

bypassing the summoning conditions makes this OPed, I'd remove that part of the effect

 

likewise the last effect too I'd still give your opponent a chance to negate the summon

 

7/10

[Specter54]

I knew i needed to change the effect, what about this?

 

If this card is set or flipped face-down, flip it face-up immediately. If this card is on the field at the start of either player's Battle Phase, return it to its owner's hand. Once per turn, you must select one other monster you control whose attack is less than half the attack of this card. If that monster were to be used for a Ritual Summon this turn, it can be treated as every monster needed for that Ritual Summon. If it would be used for a Fusion Summon, it can be treated as every Fusion-Material monster needed. This card's effects cannot be negated.

 

I'm thinking of adding an effect where you must summon the card, and if you don't use the monster selected for another summon, you take damage. What do you think?

 

Also, I'm considering changing the card's picture, type, etc. But I'll stay with 1200 ATK.

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Also, I've got two cards here made to be OP'd. They're really hard to use, but since this card makes them easier to play, I'll probably make it a set, each monster to help summon a different type of card, and more restrictions on how you use them. But here are the powered cards, a ritual card and monster.

 

 

Fiend/Ritual/Effect

Once per turn, you can remove from play all cards in both players' Hands and Graveyards, as well as every card on the field, except this card. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. This card gains 500 Attack for every card removed from the game. You opponent cannot activate card effects during the turn this card is summoned.

 

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Deity of Purest Chaos".

You must also tribute 1 Level 2 or lower LIGHT monster, 1 Level 2 or lower DARK monster, 1 Level 7 or higher DARK monster, 1 Level 7 or higher LIGHT monster, and 1 monster with 0 Attack points. Any monster that is used for a Tribute can be counted for as many Tributes as it satisfies. Deal your opponent damage equal to the combined Levels of the monsters Tributed for this Ritual Summon x100. This card's activation and effects cannot be negated by any other effect.