Naruto: The Red Moon Wars [PG-16; Strict Advanced Clause] [STARTED! Accepting by PM]

[CarlinFan]

Naruto: The Red Moon Wars

 

An alternate future Naruto RP based on current Manga events.

[spoiler=Rules]

1. All Standard YCM Rules (Advanced Clause, etc. etc.)

 

2. This RP is PG-16. Exercise good judgment about the content of your posts. Some strong violence, occasional light sexual references, and some language are probably OK; exceptionally gory violence, sexual content of any kind, and the F-bomb are not.

 

3. The host’s word is law.

 

4. Minimum of five lines per character per post. If you have two characters, you must write five lines for each one you post for. You do not need to write for both characters each post.

 

5. If you are banned from the RP, the host inherits control of your characters.

 

6. Use proper grammar and spelling. It’s easy; just copy/paste to Word or another such processor and use the spell/grammar check systems. I am going to be very strict about this. If you have special circumstances, PM me and we’ll talk.

 

7. You are only allowed two characters- One Akatsuki and one Village Member. You may not be an Uchiha or a Rikudou. The only living Uchiha is Uchiha Madara, who I control. By that same token, the host is the one exception to the two-character rule. You may reserve a spot in the RP, but you may not reserve a rank or demon. A reservation is not a guarantee that you will be accepted.

 

8. Three-Strike banning system.

Improper Spelling/Grammar = One Strike

Violation of Rules = One Strike

OOC-Only Post = Two Strikes

Disrespect Towards Another RP Member = Two Strikes

Violation of Forum Rules = Three Strikes and Mod Notification

 

 

[spoiler=Plot]

Three years ago, at the Five Kage Summit, Uchiha Madara and Uchiha Sasuke slew Hatake Kakashi in battle, with Uzumaki Naruto and Haruno Sakura retreating. Sasuke took Kakashi’s Sharingan, obtaining Eternal Mangekyou in one eye.

 

At this time, Madara set in motion two simultaneous plans. While he sent Team Hawk to destroy Konoha, Madara had Zetsu begin organizing a Seppuku Squad breakout.

 

The Seppuku squads are the dirty little secret of the five villages. When a ninja too evil to be free but too useful to kill is captured, the villages strap trackers and contact-activated explosive tags to them in several places and use them as Black Ops. These Ninja are among the most villainous and dangerous in the world, some of them having been candidates for Kage status in their village before their capture. Through Zetsu, Madara organized a massive uprising of Seppuku Squads, which would coincide with Sasuke’s attack upon Konoha.

 

Sasuke’s team was slain during the attack, along with the entire Rookie Eleven and the majority of Konoha Jonin. Sasuke attained this by provoking Naruto into losing control of the Nine-Tails (which escaped), then seizing control of the demon with the Mangekyou. Sasuke’s team destroyed almost all of Konoha before a gravely injured Naruto stabbed Sasuke, making him lose control of the Fox. The Kyuubi then went on a blind rampage, killing all of Team Hawk and all Konoha shinobi before being subdued by Madara. With his vengeance achieved, Madara used the Fox to destroy the Hokage Mountain before having Zetsu sound the order for the Squads to rebel. With Zetsu having disabled the explosive tags, the Seppuku Squads were able to assassinate the four remaining Kages and Konan of the Rain before escaping into the wilderness.

 

Since then, new Kages have emerged, with Amegakure taking Konoha’s spot in the ‘Big Five’ villages. Meanwhile, Madara has organized the Seppuku Squads into a massive fighting force, forming a new Akatsuki. The five villages are now at war with Akatsuki (and, at times, each other) in what has become known as the ‘Red Moon Wars’. Madara, having captured Kirabi and completed his collection of Bijuu, has created a new generation of Jinchuuriki to lead Akatsuki as its generals, taking the Kyuubi as his own demon. Its regenerative abilities have restored him to his youthful condition, and his is exponentially more formidable than he ever was in the days of Hashirama. However, this new generation of Kages is proving unexpectedly formidable…

 

 

[spoiler=Availability of Demons and Kages]

One-Tails: Kisune Yamanaka (Ninjew)

Two-Tails: Setsu Achaiha (Dark Necro)

Three-Tails: Available

Four-Tails: Available

Five-Tails: Available

Six-Tails: Furosuto Kousen (namelessk)

Seven-Tails: Minamoto Kagetake (Carlinfan)

Eight-Tails: Hoshimi Yamanaka (jcbballer)

Nine-Tails: Uchiha Madara (Carlinfan)

 

Tsuchikage: Yoshioka Eiji (Carlinfan)

Amekage: Akihito Arato (Dark Necro)

Raikage: Jun Senoue (jcbballer)

Kazekage: Available

Mizukage: Kotaro Fuma (Random Dude)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Akatsuki Army Membership]

Each general commands two 4-man squads and is tasked with dealing with a certain village. Each squad is led by a lieutenant.

 

Supreme Commander: Uchiha Madara (Carlinfan)

 

Generals (5): Minamoto Kagetake (Carlinfan), Furosuto Kousen (namelessk), Kisune Yamanaka (Ninjew), Hoshimi Yamanaka (jcbballer), Setsu Achaiha (Dark Necro)

 

Lieutenants (2 per General):

 

Squad Members (3 per Lieutenant):

 

 

 

[spoiler=Village Information]

Konohagakure, Otogakure, and Takigakure have been destroyed.

Sunagakure, Iwagakure, and Amegakure are allies.

Kirigakure and Kumogakure are allies.

Minor villages are independent.

Villages not explicitly stated to be allies are opposed to each other.

 

 

 

[spoiler=App]

Remove all content in parentheses, and this sentence, in the final app.

 

Name: (Must be a Japanese name or word)

Age:

Gender:

Faction:

Rank:

Bio: (Ten lines minimum. If you're an Akatsuki, your character should be an ex-Seppuku Squad member and a criminal. Use Spoiler tags. For those that don't know how, just put [spoiler*] to start them and [/spoiler*] to end them (remove the asterisks)).

Personality:

Appearance: (Three lines minimum. Just a picture is not acceptable; use some variation on the picture and be creative. Use heavy detail and spoiler tags, especially if you're using a picture. Also, their appearance should fit with the story- a Feudal Japan -style environment with some modern fashions.)

Elemental Affinity (dual affinities allowed, but I may request that you remove one affinity):

Weapons (if applicable; no need to list Kunai and Shuriken here, as those are implied; use spoiler tags if you are using an image):

Abilities: (Rate on a 1-10 scale)

Ninjutsu:

Genjutsu:

Taijutsu:

Intelligence:

Speed:

Strength:

Stamina:

Agility:

Chakra:

Hand seals:

Total:

Jutsu list: (Use spoiler tags and the English names. They should be real. If you want to use made-up Jutsu, PM me with a description of the techniques and I'll reply yes or no. Your jutsu list is allowed to be expansive; however, your bio must back this up. Your character can know a massive amount of jutsu for a single element if that is their affinity and they are a Kage/ANBU class; they cannot know dozens of jutsu with multiple elements. Try to stick to your affinity.)

Demon: (Only available for Akatsuki members)

RP Sample (use the character the app is about; should be six lines or more. This should be longer than your average post and should serve as a demonstration of your character. If you're applying for a demon, use it in the sample. I prefer a combat sample, but it's not necessary.):

 

 

 

[spoiler=My Apps]

[spoiler=Yoshioka Eiji]

Name: Yoshioka Eiji

 

Age: 32

 

Gender: Male

 

Faction: Iwagakure

 

Rank: Tsuchikage

 

Bio:

 

Born to a pair of ANBU members, Eiji was trained to be their successor in Black Ops from a young age. He could accurately throw multiple shuriken at four, was learning two jutsu a week at five, was a Chunin at six, and made Jonin at thirteen, though he had been capable of passing the Jonin exam from a younger age.

Eiji was a stellar Jonin, his massive knowledge of Earth and Lightning jutsu aiding him in completing a massive count of B- and A-ranked missions. He continued this until age 25 and was about to join ANBU with his parents when they were slain by Deidara during his defection and escape from Iwagakure. Upon hearing the news, Eiji was grief-stricken. He joined ANBU, and forced himself to take on a punishing series of A-Rank missions to grow strong enough to kill Deidara. After completing 10 A-Rank and 2 S-Rank missions without more than a day of rest between them, Eiji collapsed from exhaustion.

Recovering after a week, Eiji continued training hard for the next four years, becoming ANBU Captain. He was determined to hunt down Deidara and the rest of Akatsuki and kill them all. Upon hearing that Deidara had been killed, Eiji went into a rage, leaving Iwa to kill Sasuke. He was subdued by a team of eight ANBU, hospitalizing six. During his recovery, the Five Kage Summit and the ensuing sequence of events occured. Recovering just in time to lead the investigation into Konoha, Eiji and his squad obtained all surviving documents of Konoha's techniques, including Hashirama Senju's Demon Restraint technique. In the aftermath of the Seppuku Squad uprising, the entire village nominated Eiji as the next Tsuchikage. He took the position gratefully. Having learned patience during his recovery, Eiji consolidated Iwa's power, cultivating a new generation of Shinobi before reaching out to Suna and Ame with offers of an alliance. Despite this new patience, Eiji spends a large amount of time in the field, delegating paperwork to secretaries and civilians. Eiji is now the de facto leader of the Western Shinobi Alliance.

 

 

 

Personality: Eiji was once a bright, cheerful boy; however, the trauma of his parents' death has made him bitter and ill-tempered. Four years of nonstop carnage only served to sour his demeanor and his outlook on the world. Following Deidara's death and the subsequent events, Eiji's temper cooled, but he became even more cold and forbidding. He holds disdain for the light-hearted and jokers and despises all forms of visual art.

 

Appearance:

 

Eiji is 6'3", with the same facial appearance and hair as the picture. His eyes are heterochromatic brown and hazel. He weighs 200 lb. due to his concentrated musclemass. He has a very defined physique, though he isn't bulky by any means; Eiji appears rather lanky and wiry until one views his musculature. Eiji only wears the Tsuchikage's hat to formal functions; his normal attire involves a long brown robe with a golden lion pattern on the back, a dark brown tunic, and a black Hakama. In combat, he wears his old ANBU vest and a black Shinobi jumpsuit. His ANBU Mask has a lion design on it.

 

 

 

Elemental Affinity: Dual Lightning & Earth

 

Weapons: Black Kusari-gama with Ten Foot Chain

 

Abilities:

Ninjutsu: 10

Genjutsu: 4

Taijutsu: 10

Intelligence: 9

Speed: 10

Strength: 10

Stamina: 10

Agility: 9

Chakra: 10

Hand seals: 8

Total: 90

 

Jutsu list:

 

Shadow Clone Technique

Earth Style: Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-bringing Hands (an Earth-style variant on the Wood-style demon restraining technique. It suppresses the chakra of whoever is within the seal, regardless of demonic nature, and does not require the presence of a crystal. However, it is not as potent as Hashirama's technique.)

Earth Clone Technique

Earth Release: Aggravated Rock Technique

Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide

Earth Release: Dropping Lid

Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin

Earth Release: Earth Corridor

Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique

Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears

Earth Release: Earth Dome

Earth Release: Earth Spear

Earth Release: Hidden Among Rocks Technique

Earth Release: Earth Flow River

Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld

Earth Release: Earth Pillar Prison

Earth Release: Rock Lodging Destruction

Earth Release: Wheel of Fortune

Lightning Ball

Lightning Release: False Darkness

Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder

Lightning Release Shadow Clone

 

 

 

Demon: N/A

 

RP Sample:

 

Eiji buried a dozen Shuriken in the Kumo ninja, allowing the barriers around him to sink back into the forest ground. He'd gotten the info he needed.

Eiji made a one-handed seal, generating a Lightning Clone. The two exchanged a glance before splitting up, the Clone bearing Eiji's thoughts.

As the clone streaked back towards Iwa with valuable recon, Eiji generated a trio of Earth Clones, the improvised squadron fanning out and searching for the Kumo squad Eiji knew to be nearby. Trees were rendered blurs as Eiji shot from branch to branch. Eiji scanned the trees vigilantly, ears perked, until he heard a tree fall somewhere to his right. One of his clones had made contact.

Eiji rotated 90 degrees on his heel, he and two clones converging on the third. What Eiji found was almost amusing.

His clone had already incapacitated one Kumo Ninja, who lay unconscious at the base of a large oak. The shinobi's left heel was twisted at a ridiculous angle. Another nearby tree had fallen to the ground, a massive boulder lying nearby. Eiji's clone was engaged in hand-to-hand combat with the squad leader, the other two readying an overhead ambush.

Eiji freed his Kusarigama from his waist, unspooling the chain as he wove a string of one-handed seals, remotely concentrating chakra into the ground. "Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears."

A quintet of sharpened, yard-long rock projectiles shot past Eiji towards the Kumo-nin. They leapt back, one of them clipped in the leg. The aforementioned shinobi fell off of his branch, tumbling downward.

"Earth Release: Earth Spear."

Eiji felt the familiar cooling sensation as his skin hardened to a steel-like substance. As Eiji flicked his wrist, wrapping the chain around the upper of the two, he launched off of the tree, tackling the other in midair. Eiji cast the bound shinobi down to his clones with another wrist-flick, burying the blade of the Kusarigama in a tree. His fingers clenched around the chain, stopping his fall. "Earth Style: Aggravating Rock Technique."

The Kumo-nin he held in his arms cried out in pain as his arms turned to rock. Eiji released his grip, sending the crippled shinobi tumbling down to his clones.

Eiji saw a blur in the corner of his eye. The fourth shinobi, the one with the twisted ankle, was fleeing. Eiji decided to let him go. Nothing to lose by letting the Eastern Alliance know that they were nothing to Yoshioka Eiji.

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Minamoto Kagetake]

 

Name: Minamoto Kagetake

 

Age: 26

 

Gender: Male

 

Faction: Akatsuki

 

Rank: General

 

Bio:

 

Kagetake was born 26 years ago to a pair of Kirigakure civilians: A restaurant owner and the Mizukage's secretary. Kagetake's life was rather uneventful until one afternoon fifteen years ago.

That afternoon, a drunken Ronin attempted to rob Kagetake's father's restaurant. Kagetake took one of the decorative Katana from the wall, engaging the Ronin.

After the battle, Kagetake took the Ronin's sword as his own. Suffice it to say the Ronin didn't need it anymore.

This would've been written off as a fluke if not for the presence of a rather auspicious patron- one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. The Swordsman was about to intervene when he saw Kagetake engage the Ronin. The child was quite obviously a prodigy, and the Swordsman took the child under his wing. For the next 6 years, Kagetake was trained by the Swordsman. The Swordsman knew that Kagetake was a once-a-century opportunity and was determined to not let this child go to waste.

What the Swordsman didn't know was that Kagetake had grown up seeing shinobi treat his parents (and him) like trash. Kagetake had developed a deep-seated resentment for the arrogant shinobi of Kirigakure. Kagetake's youthful mind assumed all shinobi behaved this way, and Kagetake spent much of his free time cultivating relationships with a number of anti-shinobi resistance groups. Upon turning 17, Kagetake slew his master before attempting to escape Kirigakure. The Mizukage sent 8 Hunter-Nin after the boy.

217 Senbon and 7 dead Hunter-Nin later, Kagetake was subdued and added to the Seppuku Squad. Knowing that Kagetake's own life was too little leverage against the boy, Kirigakure took his parents hostage and linked his exploding tags to others placed on the parents.

For the next 6 years, Kiri used Kagetake as an instrument of carnage against the other villages. Given that Kiri's training exercises alone are more violent than the average B-Rank mission, one can only imagine the horrors Kagetake was confronted with (and inflicted) during his time in the Squad.

What happened to Kagetake at this point would eternally confuse the few psychiatrists that survived examining him. Rather than retreat into his own psyche to try to cope with the trauma, Kagetake embraced it wholeheartedly. In fact, he completely stopped sleeping; to replenish himself, Kagetake utilized a combat meditation ritual he'd learned from his master. This ritual combined the adrenaline rush of battle with the instinctive flow of sword combat to attain a deranged sort of serenity.

After six years of violent service to the Hidden Mist, Kagetake was contacted by Zetsu, who'd already set up Seppuku Squad rebellions across the entire continent. Zetsu himself was to coordinate Kirigakure's rebellion personally. Once the rebellion occured, Kagetake waited long enough for Zetsu to free his parents before slaying the plantlike shinobi. From there, Kagetake deposited his parents with some of his resistance 'friends' before joining Madara's army and becoming the most enthusiastic and perhaps most powerful General of the entire army, despite the fact that he only had the 7-tailed Demon.

 

 

 

Personality: Kagetake is rather overconfident, toying with all but the most powerful of enemies before delivering the Coup de Grace. When Kagetake lets loose, a massive grin spreads across his face. Since combat is the only way for Kagetake to attain any sort of serenity, his insatiable bloodlust combined with his massive enthusiasm for carnage lend him the nickname "The Gleeful Demon of the Red Mist".

 

Appearance:

 

Kagetake's face and hair are identical to the picture, though he often has a deranged grin from ear to ear. Kagetake stands at 6'1", weighing 195 lb. due to muscle. His legs and arms are spindly, lending him the appearance of a violent stick figure during combat. Kagetake wears his Akatsuki robe over his normal clothing, though he only buttons the top button; underneath, he wears a black t-shirt, a dark crimson lamellar armor vest, and long, loose black pants.

 

 

 

Elemental Affinity: Water

 

Weapons: Kagetake possesses a number of swords collected from fallen enemies over the years. At last count, he had two Ninjato, one Nodachi, and six Katana. His primary weapon appears to be no more than a hilt and Tsuba. The sword, Shimeri, was Kagetake's master's blade before him. Shimeri attracts ambient moisture to it, drawing water particles from as far a distance as the upper atmosphere. This increase in available moisture makes use of most of Kagetake's jutsu drastically easier.

 

Abilities:

Ninjutsu: 9

Genjutsu: 7

Taijutsu: 10

Intelligence: 7

Speed: 10

Strength: 10

Stamina: 10

Agility: 10

Chakra: 10

Hand seals: 9

Total: 92

 

Jutsu list:

 

Body Flicker Technique

Water Release: Water Prison Technique

Water Release: Water Prison Explosion Technique

Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet

Water Clone Technique

Hidden Mist Technique

Water Release: Moisture Blade (Uses Shimeri's hollow hilt as a base for a superthin blade made purely from ambient moisture)

Mirror Illusion: False Blade Reflection (A Genjutsu that creates a reflection of Kagetake, the reflective axis being Kagetake's center of gravity at the time of activation; the reflection is a perfect copy, but only affects the sense of sight)

Water Release: Moisture Manipulation (Used to condense and manipulate the ambient moisture into any shape Kagetake can visualize)

Water Release: Moisture Drain (Through skin-to-skin contact, Kagetake can drain water from another's body and expel it through his own skin, creating more ambient moisture for him to manipulate; the technique also works through Water Clones)

 

 

 

Demon: Seven-Tailed Beetle

 

RP Sample:

 

Kagetake hovered above the enemy's camp, the 7-Tails' insect wings fluttering. The Kirigakure squad had set up their tents and were preparing dinner before turning in for the night. Kagetake decided not to let them finish their last supper.

Kagetake made a one-handed seal, muttering "Hidden Mist Technique" under his breath. A thick fog descended upon the area, and Kagetake forced his wings to recede, dropping down on the enemies and unsheathing a single sword.

A quick slice dispatched the squad leader. With a point of his finger, Kagetake eliminated the second using needles of moisture. The third fell with another quick slice. Now, the fourth...

Kagetake slid under a blind Kunai slash, gripping the Shinobi's ankle in a vise. Kagetake activated his Moisture Drain technique, drying the Kirigakure Shinobi's body to a husk.

With a thought, Kagetake dispelled the fog around the area, extending his wings. He lunged, flying into the forest and back to base. The Gleeful Demon of the Red Mist had slain four shinobi and disappeared without a trace.

Kagetake began laughing maniacally. Nothing new...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Accepted:

Uchiha Madara (Carlinfan)

Yoshioka Eiji (Carlinfan)

Minamoto Kagetake (Carlinfan)

Kotaro Fuma (Random Dude)

Jun Senoue (jcbballer)

Kousen Furosuto (namelessk)

Hoshimi Yamanaka (jcbballer)

Kisune Yamanaka (Ninjew)

Setsu Achaiha (Dark Necro)

Akihito Arato (Dark Necro)

Resshin Ichijin (Allesk)

 

Reservations:

deept97

Dark Lightning x2

namelessk

double_c4

[CarlinFan]

Bump.

[Azure Flame Kite]

reserve, please.

[Reaper of Shadows]

ur app is realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly long

but the plot sound sinteresting

so i'll join

i'll post it later after i finish it

[Azure Flame Kite]

I'd like to reserve both 8-tails/general (for the same character) and a second character, please.

[Guest Random Dude]

(Long app, don't you think?)

Name: Kotaro Fuma

 

Age: 26

 

Gender: Male

 

Faction: Kirigakure

 

Rank:Mizukage

 

Bio:

ex-Seppoku member, Kotaro escaped from the Kirigakure before the Seppoku uprising. Upon returning, he found the village in chaos, the shinobi were fighting the other members of the Seppoku squad and were being struck down one by one. Kotaro aided Kirigakure, expelling the Seppoku and earning himself the rank of Mizukage as the last one was slain in the battle. He rebuilt the village and forged an alliance with Kumogakure. He fights to clear his territory of the Seppoku and Akatsuki. He bears a grudge against Madara Uchiha for imprisoning him and vows to kill him, even if it's the last thing he does. Is considered insane by many, but they dare not speak of it for fear that he will destroy them.

 

 

Personality: Calm and has a dark sense of humor that only someone as sadistic as he is would find funny.

 

Appearance:

6'2 in height, without upper body armor except for the gauntlet, which he uses to fight, his pants are black instead of blue, and bears more runes on his face.

 

Elemental Affinity: Fire

 

Weapons: His Body, Demon Gauntlet

 

Abilities: (Rate on a 1-10 scale)

Ninjutsu: 8/10

Genjutsu:2/10

Taijutsu: 10/10

Intelligence: 7/10

Speed: 8/10

Strength: 7/10

Stamina: 8/10

Agility: 7/10

Chakra: 6/10

Hand seals: 5/10

Total: 68/100

 

Jutsu list:

Fire Ball

Phoenix Flower

Dragon Flame

Dragon Summoning

Bloodline: Extension (can extend his body parts)

(I'll PM the other jutsu as they are ones I made up)

 

Demon:none

 

RP Sample: "Extend!" Kotaro yelled as he struck down yet another of the Akatsuki grunts with a piercing strike to the heart. A squad of Anbu was following close behind him, but staying out of range of his attacks and only attacking when Kotaro let one through. An Akatsuki was trying to escape the battle, but was stopped in his tracks by Kotaro. As more fled, he bit his thumb and performed a series of hand signs, "Dragon Summoning Jutsu!" A large dragon rose out of the ground and destroyed the rest of the Akatsuki. "Not even a warm-up." he said with a disappointed sigh.

[CarlinFan]

I think the app ends up looking longer because I spaced the sections apart.

That was fixed, but it still ended up looking like it would take pretty long. XD

 

Kotaro Fuma accepted. Glad to see there are other Samurai Warriors fans out there. Tokugawa actually helped me win a school debate last saturday (it's a looooooooong story). I thought the bio looked a bit short, until I realized it was 10 lines long on the post interface. If you could, maybe add a bit of detail about why he was in the Seppuku Squad in the first place. Looking forward to the RP.

 

@ jcbballer: Demons and ranks cannot be reserved, but I will reserve a second spot for you.

[Guest Random Dude]

Kotaro Fuma accepted. Glad to see there are other Samurai Warriors fans out there. Tokugawa actually helped me win a school debate last saturday (it's a looooooooong story). I thought the bio looked a bit short' date=' until I realized it was 10 lines long on the post interface. If you could, maybe add a bit of detail about why he was in the Seppuku Squad in the first place. Looking forward to the RP.

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I'll explain later in the RP.

[Dark Lightning]

Reserve Raikage App and a General App for Akatsuki. Will post app in the morning.

[Azure Flame Kite]

[spoiler=my first app:]

Name: Jun Senoue

Age: 24 (Almost 25)

 

Gender:Male

 

Faction:Kumogakure

 

Rank: Raikage

 

[spoiler=Bio:] Born in Kumogakure by a pair of ANBU, Jun and his twin brother, Rei, are cousins(or at least, relatives) of Darui, and as such possess the Kekkei Genkai of Storm Release. Much like Naruto and Sasuke, who were three years their junior, they were both friends and rivals; they pushed each other through competition. They both made chuunin then they were 10, jounin at 15, ANBU at 17 and started training in the art of the sword when they were 8. Jun chose twin katana while Rei chose a lance, both of which could channel elemental chakra and were made from Takumi village. On an A-ranked, mission while they were still jounin, his brother was killed in a fight against Deidara and Sasori trying to let him escape. Strike 1 for Akatsuki. After taking his brother's signature weapon and vowing to avenge him, he vowed never to allow his comrades fall on his watch again. Then, four years later, Yugito, his friend, was killed by the Akatsuki. Strike 2. Then, about a year later, Everyone else: A, B, Darui, and team Samui were killed. Strike 3. From then on, he vowed to eliminate the Akatsuki and avenge his friends and brother, even if it meant his life. He then ascended to the rank of Raikage 1 year before the beginning of this story.

 

 

Personality: Jun is ever happy and optimistic, and is rarely ever seen without a smile on his face. He believes that things will eventually work out, despite however bad things seem. Jun is also very playful, and commonly teases his friends, but despite his happy and go-getter point of view, Jun is at times very serious and almost dark. He almost always refuses to forgive anyone who hurts his friends or other inhabitants of Kumo. Jun, for the most part, only fights to win, and spares his enemies after defeating them only for them to attack him when his back is turned, though during missions or fighting someone he finds evil, he will kill. He holds a particular grudge against the Akatsuki, vowing to eradicate every single one of them. His staggering power is simultaneously reined in and enhanced by his fierce loyalty and morality. He is also a master at his own form of taijutsu, which is mainly focused around his lower body, therefore, his legs are ridiculously strong, comparable to Sakura or Kisame in power.

[spoiler=Appearance:] Jun stands at 6"0' and weighs roughly 185 lbs. He still wears the headband and blue scarf from the picture, but that's all the clothing that is the same. He wears a chain mail undershirt under a red t-shirt with a white lightning bolt on it under a black cloak with blue lightning designs on it. He also wears a shuriken holster on his right thigh, and is usually seen with a stick of pocky in his mouth.

 

 

Elemental Affinity: Storm (ergo, Lightning and Water) release

 

Weapons: A silver lance with a griffin-headed tip that he can use as a lightning rod to channel lightning-release chakra to, similar to the Flying Swallow technique (Back). He also carries chakra-enhanced twin katana(Back).

 

Abilities: (Rate on a 1-10 scale)

Ninjutsu: 9

Genjutsu: 6

Taijutsu:10

Intelligence:9

Speed:9

Strength: 10

Stamina: 9

Agility: 8

Chakra: 9

Hand seals:7

Total:86

 

[spoiler=Jutsu list:]Storm Release: Demon Dragon Storm

Storm Release: Laser Circus

Lightning Release Shadow Clone

Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration

Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God

Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique

Water Release: Water Shark Missile Technique

Lightning Release: False Darkness

Lightning Release Shadow Clone

Lightning Release Armor

Lightning Destruction

Plasma Ball

Thunder Saber

Shunshin

Flying Swallow

Fangs of Lightning

 

[spoiler=RP Sample:] "Ugh!" a random Amegakure genin yelled in pain as he was pelted in the leg by a single shuriken as he and his team were traveling to the tower, disabling his leg and making him fall to the ground, alerting the rest of his 3-man squad to the ambush. The other boy and girl of the team dragged him to a safe spot, the boy getting into a fighting stance and the girl tended to their teammate.

"Who's there?!" the boy yelled, trying to keep the fear from his voice, but beginning to fail. Suddenly he heard a rustle of leaves and got ready.

"Relax, relax," a calm, lazy voice said placadingly . Coming out from the bushes was a boy about a year younger than them walked out of the bushes. He was a few inches shorter than the boy with the kunai, maybe about 5"0', he wore a red t-shirt, green pants, his face was interesting; he had dirty blond hair, his right eye was covered by a long bang, his left eye was covered by a blue headband that went down to is waist. He also had two katanas on his back and a stick of pocky in his mouth. Overall, he was a pretty weird looking kid.

"Look," the mysterious boy started, walking towards them with his hands in his pockets, his pocky stick bobbing up and down with every movement of his mouth. "I don't want any trouble, I just want to know what type of scroll you have, so just hand it over and nobody gets hurt."

"Fat chance," the other boy responded confidently, smirking, but the slight shaking in his body gave away his fear; this guy had been able to ambush them alone with no problem. He was good.

"Ugh," the mystery-boy sighed, palming his face in frustration; this was the 3rd time today he'd looked for a scroll while his team rested, and his patient was beginning to wane. "Fine," he said. "I'll just have to take it by force!" he finished, emphasizing the last word as he bolted to them before a shout rang through the air.

"JUUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!"

"AHHH!" Jun shouted in fright, jolting out of his seat. He looked around his office to find who woke him, only to find his black-haired(obviously annoyed) female ex-teammate, Katsu. "What the hell?!" He shouted, rubbing his ears.

"Time to wake up, lazy-ass," the irritated woman said, folding her arms across her chest. "What were you doing?"

"Oh, dreaming about the chuunin exams we were in," he replied, folding his hands behind his head. "Good times..."

 

 

[CarlinFan]

Jun Senoue accepted. Dark Lightning, the Raikage position is taken; however, you could always be Kumo's ANBU Captain or the Kage of another village. Specific positions cannot be reserved, but the way things are going, I don't think you'll have to worry about your spot being taken. :)

[namelessk]

Reserve me two spots please. One regular shinobi and an Akatsuki.

[CarlinFan]

Minamoto Kagetake app finished. Come one, come all, and witness the glory of the Gleeful Demon of the Red Mist.

 

BUMP

[Damiano Tosē]

I would like to have a reservation with Amekage.

[Guest Random Dude]

When does this start?

[CarlinFan]

There are currently three people who have made reservations but have not posted apps. Once two of those three post apps or Monday arrives (whichever comes first), we will begin.

[Damiano Tosē]

[spoiler=Appli]Name: Akihito Arato

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Faction: Amegakure

Rank: Amekage

Bio: Akihito Arato... a blind amekage whose eye sight was lost as a baby but sharpened his other senses and his reflexes. He is the leader of the Apostles of the Skies, which seeks to make revolution, not only to overthrow Genesis, but change the world's leadership by "incompetent people".

Falling in with the wrong crowd at a young age, Akihito was forced to learn the art of the sword quickly on the battlefield. He became the leader of the small band of villains and murders. They spent most of their time pillaging and slaughtering villages. One fateful night, he and his men stormed a ship. He beheaded the captain of the ship in a furry of bloodlust. Akihito's comrade then pick up the severed head and was about to raise it over his own in triumph when he saw that he held Akihito's father's head in his hand. In state of denial that Akihito was after he heard news that his so called "Comrades" slaughtered his father, Akihito disappeared into the nearby woods. He went insane with rage and guilt and convinced himself that someone else killed his father. His lust for blood and immortailty gained him the rank of amekage, the village needed a strong leader to lead them to victory. Since he is blind and cannot see his opponents, he uses his senses and reflexes to pinpoint and locate his enemies chakra. Shizune - his mother, and a beautiful, nice young lady - had been killed by two gang members. This lead to him being in a state of denial, just staying quiet, not saying anything that occurred and hoping that he would get his revenge on his mother's killers. But then again with no luck, he still patiently waits for the right time and day to finally strike. Ryoku died of a heartach when Akihito was young, leaving Akihito as a poor orphan when he was a child.

Personality: Akihito is quiet, does not like to talk much. He is also calm and collected and fearless, he will not go down without a good fight. He is ruthless, fearless, and above all, he's willing to protect anyone that is truly dear to him. He likes to be laid back and neutral, not letting anybody know how he truly feels during life. Akihito does not like getting help from others, on the account that he likes to do things alone, he will still help with others who need it the most.

Appearance:

[spoiler=Appearance]Akihito is 176 cm

weighing at an ease of 65 kg. He has short snow white hair with bloody red eyes. He also had a scar running down his eye, although no one is certain why. Akihito wears a vest with white trims and the color of the vest is pitch blackish red. He is very muscular but skinny, never keeps his vest open for merely showing off his godly chest. He has a scar over his right arm, which stretches down to the palm of his hand and a huge scar that reigns over his chest. His skin is vanilla tanned, smooth easily as baby's skin mixed with oil and has no piercings what so ever.

 

Elemental Affinity: Wind

Weapons: His Dragon Blade goes through a series of levels, (Lv. 1, the blue transparent balde, Lv.2, the black blade with the shark-shaped demon-head, Lv.3,the form where it's not exactly a blade, but a giant cutting mutant arm implanted into Haos , and Lv. Max, the strongest form where the arm creates a light blade similar to a lightsaber). In his final battle against his rival, His dragon blade achieved his maximum level and his arm created a light blade similar to a lightsaber. It has been at that level ever since.

Abilities:

[spoiler=Abilities]

Ninjutsu: 10

Genjutsu: 8

Taijutsu: 10

Intelligence: 9

Speed: 10

Strength: 9

Stamina: 9

Agility: 8

Chakra: 8

Hand seals: 8

Total:89

 

Jutsu list:

[spoiler=Fuuton Jutsu]

[spoiler=A-rank]

Fuuton: Kaze No Yaiba (Wind Style: Wind Blade)

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)

Fuuton: Renkuudan (Wind Style: Drilling Wind Bullet)

Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)

Fuuton: Fuuryuudan no Jutsu (Wind Style: Dragon Slice no Jutsu)

 

[spoiler=B-Rank]Fuuton: Kaze Gaeshi (Wind Style: Wind Return)

Fuuton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa (Wind Style: Infinte Sand Great Break Through)

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)

Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi (Wind Style: Great Cutting Whirlwind)

Fuuton: Juuha Reppou Shou (Wind Style: Beast Wave Violent Wind Strike)

Fuuton: Kaze Gyorai (Wind Torpedo)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Genjutsu]

Kahen Tonsou no Jutsu (Flower Petal Escape Technique)

Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing)

Kai (Release)

 

[spoiler=Taijutsu]

[spoiler=A-rank]

Hayabusa Otoshi (Peregrine Falcon Drop)

Gouwan (Strong Arm)

 

[spoiler=B-rank]

Atsu Shou - Pressure Palm

 

[spoiler=C-rank]TarenKen and TarenKyaku - Multi-Connecting Fist and Leg

Shou Geki Shou – Rising Palm Attack

 

 

RP Sample:

[spoiler=RP Sample]

Now at the age of 23 and promoted as the new Amekage of Amegakure, Akihito Arato swore his life to protect his village.

 

He kept Kimicho and Sousuke close to him at all times. They were appointed as Legendary Sanins of Amegakure. Akihito stood up from his chair and looked outside his window at what seemed to be his village as Kimicho and Sousuke stood in his office with him. "How do you like being the 4th Amegakure Akihito?" Kimicho asked Akihito as he turned his body to the side and pointed his left hand at Kimicho.

 

"It feels... wonderful." Akihito said as he finally get to live out his dream as the strongest ninja in Amegakure. Akihito's assistant burst through the door panting hard while looking at the two Sanins. "Am i disturbing anything?" The assistant said while looking at the 3 high rank ninjas. "No Mimi. Go on." Akihito said standing near the window with his eyes closed. "Sorry again sir, but we just got report that rogue ninjas are heading this way as we speak." Sousuke and Kimicho looked at the assistant and then at each other.

 

"Rouge are they? Sousuke. Kimicho." Akihito said as he pointed at the two. "Sir?" They both said in unison awaiting for his orders. "Can you go and check on things for a bit?" Akihito said as his body felt the chair as he sat down on it. "Sir, are you going to be alright watching the village?" Sousuke questioned him. "I have been in this condition for years and nothing have stopped me from being where i am right now...

 

...so yes i'll be fine."

 

Akihito said as he kept his eyes closed, meditating while still seated on the chair in indian style. Sousuke and Kimicho both looked at each other as they both disappeared at the same time. Mimi, the assistant, walked out the room and closed the door slightly. Akihito stayed in that position until Sousuke and Kimicho returned from their sub-mission.

 

 

[CarlinFan]

Dark Necro's app rejected. There are a number of inconsistencies in your bio, not to mention the fact that your personality doesn't match the bio either. Your character is also far too powerful. 98 is far too high for a blind shinobi with no formal training. Your character somehow knows Rasenshuriken, despite the fact that the technique was invented by Naruto, who never encountered Akihito. Lastly, 'you will experience throughout the RP' is not an acceptable excuse. You must provide an RP sample for me to consider alongside your app.

[Damiano Tosē]

I guess i'll limit myself in the late-70s... how about that? Rasen Shuriken is apart of the Fuuton jutsu is it not? Here is the link to all the jutsus that i am using. Naruto-Remix Akihito is quiet because he does not speak of what happened upon the ship and of his mother's death. He's willing to protect the ones he love, like the love of his mother and father. He does not want nobody to know how he truly feels, which is why he is so laid back and collected. I am deeply sorry for the Rp Sample. edited my application...

[CarlinFan]

Better, but still not accepted.

A few things:

1. As I explained, it is technically impossible for Akihito to know Rasen Shuriken, as he never encountered Naruto.

2. Your abilities are overpowered in some areas and self-debilitating in others. If hand seals are 5, then Akihito will die before he can finish the seals for a jutsu. If genjutsu is 2, then Akihito's genjutsu are too weak to be useful. Raise Genjutsu and Hand Seals and decrease stats in other areas. Also, I recommend abilities in the mid-80s, otherwise your fights might not go so well. :)

3. An RP Sample is not a summary of the character, it is an example of you RP'ing with the character. Write a sample of what a post with your character could look like.

4. Your bio says that Akihito "saw that he held his own father's head in his hand". This is impossible. Akihito was blind from infancy, as you said; therefore, he couldn't have seen his father's face. Even feeling the face to get an image of it would not reveal the dead man's identity, as Akihito was blind from too young an age to have memories of his father's face.

5. Naruto never had a son; according to the RP's plot, he died soon after the current manga chapter. Even if Naruto did have a son, the child would be three years old at the time of this RP.

 

Please address these issues and I'll reconsider your app.

[Damiano Tosē]

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3. That's the introduction of the character

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edited my application...

[CarlinFan]

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3. That's the introduction of the character

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edited my application...

 

The RP sample should not be an intro. It should be a sample of your character 'in action'. A conversation, a battle, etc. Just something that shows me your character's stuff.

[Damiano Tosē]

I am deeply sorry. Edited the RP Sample.

[Azure Flame Kite]

Question for Dark Nec: Why does your character know any form of the Rasengan?

 

And I'm pretty sure that only Konoha has the right to call anyone a 'sannin', as the originals were all trained under the Sandaime (Third Hokage)

[Damiano Tosē]

He was taught the Spiraling Sphere by his mentor when he was a shinobi. This mentor was a legendary Sanin of the Amegakure before he died. He left his prized jutsu to Akihito. Unfortunately, it is not as strong as the Fuuton: Rasen Shuriken Rasengan.