ProSora Posted March 4, 2010 Report Share Posted March 4, 2010 Well tell me if there are any ones like this, The names are Latin and there earth names from the family tree...I also made "Legend Counters"Please constructive criticism!!!! Booster: [spoiler=Monsters] King of the Forest [spoiler=Lore]While face up this card's name is treated as "Legendary Beast". This card can not be Normal or Special Summoned. This card can be only be Special Summoned by removing from play a "Legendary Beast" you control with 2 or more "Legend Counters" on it. Once this card is summoned place 1 "Legend Counter" on every "Legendary Beast" you control. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle place 1 "Legend Counter" on any monster you control. You can destroy a "Legend Counter" on this card to destroy any card on the field. [spoiler=Synchro Monsters][spoiler=Lore]1 "Legendary Beast" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Beast-Type monsters.During your Main Phase you can place 1 "Legend Counter" on any face-up monster. You can destroy 1 "Legend Counter" to send 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. For every "Legendary Beast" you control this card gains 200 ATK. [spoiler=Lore]1 "Legendary Beast" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Beast-type monsters.While this card is face-up it can not be destroyed by battle. Once this card is summoned destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. For every Spell and Trap card destroyed by any card effect, this card gains a "Legend Counter" for each card destroyed. If this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap card, destroy 1 "Legend Counter" to negate the effect. [spoiler=Magic Cards] [spoiler=Trap Cards] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 effects and OCG are ok, but these images well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDevil27 Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 OCG ok, but some of the pics are confusing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 how are my pics confusing>.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Pics are just weird. you could probably find anime animal pics somewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 well what ever about the pics >.> there already set in place just please rate my set D= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 the pics needs to be fantastic, not so real Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Minor OCG errors, otherwise I only spotted a few other problems: Legendary Beast - Gryphes: You need to tell the exact time of the placement, like End Phase, Standby Phase, your's, your opponent's, or both. Also when you can activate its effect, like during Main Phase. Legendary Beast - Leo: You need to tell where the Legend Counters are being placed, whether on Leo or anywhere. Hunting Ground: Again, timing needs to be listed. Probably separate the effects on the card, like this:[spoiler=Correction]"All "Legendary Beast" monsters gain 200 ATK/DEF. During each End Phase place 1 "Legend Counter" on each "Legendary Beast" on the field." Food Chain: I'd suggest getting rid of the "You gave to" at the front, just start with "Tribute 1 monster" instead. Unwilling Sacrifice: You forgot to add "monser" after "Beast-Type or Beast-Warrior-Type", I think. Howl Of The Sacrificed: I'd suggest changing "targeted" to "opponent's". Overall, Id' give you a 8/10, a 9.5/10 if you made those changes. If I liked Beasts, I'd use these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 thanks for your ratings, i personally now see my errors, but these are my second cards i have ever made, so i am probably not going to correct my errors =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 lol ok, I can understand that (I still haven't corrected my first cards either), and I'm glad you took it well, I'd just suggest going ahead and updating them so you have a clear record, and can get used to another way of designing. After all, you learn nothing from winning, but you learn much from defeat. In this case, 'defeat' being incorrectly made cards lmao. EDIT: Sorry, just realized how many cards you probably made after these lmao. Nevermind me, just a numbskull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 lol ok' date=' I can understand that (I still haven't corrected my first cards either), and I'm glad you took it well, I'd just suggest going ahead and updating them so you have a clear record, and can get used to another way of designing. After all, you learn nothing from winning, but you learn much from defeat. In this case, 'defeat' being incorrectly made cards lmao. EDIT: Sorry, just realized how many cards you probably made after these lmao. Nevermind me, just a numbskull.[/quote'] lol yea these cards did make me learnmy best rating was like 9.7 or 9.5on average now i get 8.2and thanks anyway for your words of wisdom to newbs (not noobs) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 the pics are good. and intresting effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack kenna Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 ok heres your ratingidea 8/10pics 6/10effects 9/10ocg 6/10 total 7.2good job ocg needs a bit of work and pics are to real but over all a very good set ....thanx ( : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 thanks for your rating, i know my ocg needs work, that was then this is now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuclear beast Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Here is one of my favorites I have made! Cool cards!This is one of my serpentsThis is one of my serpents Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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