[ProSora] "Flying Volatilis" {Preview To New Set}

[ProSora]

Please tell me errors and ill fix

 

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Lore:

This card is treated also as a Beast-Warrior-Type when it is not on the field. This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by removing from play 2 Beast-Type or Warrior-Type monsters from your Graveyard and discarding 1 card from your hand. This card gains 300 ATK for every card in your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, remove this card from play. If this card is out of play by its own effect, it is treated as if it was in your hand. [/align]

 

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[ragnarok1945]

change Set or Normal Summoned to Normal Summoned or Set

 

you hand should be your hand

 

change effect card to card effect (2nd to last sentence)

 

still a bit boring for just boosting atk, but it's reasonable for a new member

 

8.4/10

[ProSora]

alright i fixed the errors

and thanks for the rating

[<}Alpha Frogodile{>]

Not bad. for a just barely 2 star, great. 8.5/10

[ProSora]

thanks for your rating tdloe =3

[ragnarok1945]

alright i fixed the errors

and thanks for the rating

 

good, it's a start for the improvement

 

I'll raise my rate to 8.7/10 now

[kemren_18]

wrong thought like "If this card is out of play by its own effect, it is treated as if it was in your hand." the card ur pertaining with has no effect for itself to be excluded in the play. Seems like ur just making the reader a full because of "it is treated as if it was in your hand". specify it and be more sensitive for the effects. 5/10.