dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 hope you like themplese tell me where I need improvement! If you cant tell I like dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Well, somewhat bad OCG, but for first's, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 5/10...dont think much of these as good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 srry i just noticed a couple of typos just wanted to tell you i noticed so i dont look like an idiot thanks for the rateing sonictheweasel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 you still didnt fix Dragon-Type, or Life Points, or capitalize any of the Summoning conditions lol 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 ok ive edited them i hope they are a little better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 6/10. Did you read http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthr...p?tid=8028http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthr...?tid=19649 Yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 self destruction is screwing up and the dash between the dragon and type isnt showing up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 ok ive edited them i hope they are a little better no becuase in your third card summon is still not caped, neither is Graveyard, in all your cards, and in your first card, opponent's isnt spelled correctly lol =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 srry im trying Ill put the fully edited versions of these card in my series post The series is "Dragon Overlord Creations"It will be up soon after i make some new cards with your comments in mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 srry im trying Ill put the fully edited versions of these card in my series post The series is "Dragon Overlord Creations"It will be up soon after i make some new cards with your comments in mind ok coo! =) ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coppapoopy Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 there good but i think there way to strongbut i like the graphics on them5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon overlord Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 yeah they are a little strong but when i come out with the full seriesthere wont be too many overly strong cards plus im going to edit these tobe a little less strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Work on your grammar! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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