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Nice idea' date=' but not executed properly. A bit too boring, but I like what you did with the colors.

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How is it not executed properly? Besides it being boring? I need stuff different than what has already been said. :P

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You over did the stars, they are too strong and seem LQ

 

As for the orange it seems a tad too strong itself, try to go a bit more realistic with it. try messing with the saturation and contrast of it.

 

The whole thing seems like you didnt really plan things out, you still need to work on placement and compo. Sorry bro but u know I don't sugar coat :/

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You over did the stars' date=' they are too strong and seem LQ

 

As for the orange it seems a tad too strong itself, try to go a bit more realistic with it. try messing with the saturation and contrast of it.

 

The whole thing seems like you didnt really plan things out, you still need to work on placement and compo. Sorry bro but u know I don't sugar coat :/

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^ That

 

Maybe blue the stars? I think a Gaussian blur on the stars would soften their appearance and add more depth IMO

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You over did the stars' date=' they are too strong and seem LQ

 

As for the orange it seems a tad too strong itself, try to go a bit more realistic with it. try messing with the saturation and contrast of it.

 

The whole thing seems like you didnt really plan things out, you still need to work on placement and compo. Sorry bro but u know I don't sugar coat :/

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I'm glad you didn't sugar coat, it gives me more to work with. :] Thanks, bro.

 

^ That

 

Maybe blue the stars? I think a Gaussian blur on the stars would soften their appearance and add more depth IMO

 

I'll try that' date=' see where the outcome lies. Thanks.

 

IMO, you should brighten up the orange in the eye a bit, and, like Chaster said, try to add some badass coolio butterflies.

 

Working on the butterflies and brightening the orange. Thanks.

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Butterflies are over done theses days, I see them everywhere o.o.

 

 

I rather see astroids and ships to go with a spacey theme or spiders and webs so the face repersents fear.

 

 

Either way both would need some good editing :P

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