The Grave Dancer

[rate405]

 

 

THIS SAYS:

When sentenced to the graveyard, each of your opponent's monsters get a 350 Attack reduction. Can Special Summon one level six or lower monster from the Graveyard, into your hand, but cannot attack for the next two turns. You can only Special Summon one monster per game.

[Guest JoshIcy]

Ignoring obvious Language Errors (thats what it looks like). It's underpowered =/

[rate405]

Ignoring obvious Language Errors (thats what it looks like). It's underpowered =/

 

 

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Ignoring obvious Language Errors (thats what it looks like). It's underpowered =/

 

And I fixed it

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Bump

[ragnarok1945]

OCG errors aside, this is too UPed

 

all it does is have a monster recovery effect, and the loss of two turns for it to attack. Very dull

 

5/10

[Akumakagemaru]

Ignoring obvious Language Errors (thats what it looks like). It's underpowered =/

 

And I fixed it

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No, no you didn't. Major OCG errors, even to me. And i might suggest making it a one turn loss, possibly changing it to give 2 Level 4 or lower monsters, something like that. Just my opinion.

[kemren_18]

hmm..you have a well defined effects but specify your effects if what kind of sentenced.and the clause: You can only Special Summon one monster per game. It is the normal form of the game, summoning one monster normally per bout. Some OCG errors and the thoughts are not complete but good image.. well done for a beginner.8/10.