New Archetype: Sattelites 5/?

[neogadget lord]

this is my new archetype the sattelites... please rate/ suggest any changes...

 

 

Lore:

Once per turn you can inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each "Satellite Token" they control. Once per turn you can special summon a "Satellite Token" to your opponent’s side of the field to increase your life points by 300. Once per turn you can tribute 1 "Satellite Token" your opponent controls to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

 

 

Lore:

As long as this card remains on the field all monsters with "Satellite" in their card name are unaffected by your opponent’s continuous spell and trap cards. This card can attack your opponent’s life points directly while they control a "Satellite token". When this card is destroyed by battle you can special summon one 4 star or lower monster from your deck that includes "Satellite" in its card name excluding "Satellite Cannon- Maverick".

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Lore:

When a monster on your opponent’s side of the field is destroyed inflict 300 points of damage for each "Satellite token" they control. If your opponent controls no “Satellite token”s when a monster they control is destroyed you can special summon up to 3 "Satellite Token"s (1000 atk, 2000 def light/machine/ 1 star) to their side of the field. Destroy any monster that attacks this card before damage calculation. Destroy this card during the end phase of the turn it is attacked.

 

 

Lore:

When this monster is summoned if your opponent controls no "Satellite token"s (1000 atk, 2000 def light/machine/ 1 star) you can summon up to 3 to their side of the field. Increase all monsters on your side of the field’s ATK that include "Satellite" in their card name by 400 for each "Satellite token" on your opponent’s side of the field.

 

 

 

Lore:

You can only activate this card only while your opponent controls 3 or more "Satellite Token"s. Destroy all "Satellite Token"s they control and special summon up to 2 four stars or lower monsters that have "Satellite" in their card name from your deck.

[ragnarok1945]

your writing for the token description is wrong

 

there's capitalization errors, like special summon should be Special Summon

 

tribute should be Tribute

 

Ballisto should also be better as lv8 and not 9

 

Maverick needs drawbacks or it's OPed

 

6.5/10

[kemren_18]

well you have many grammar errors like not putting commas and specific punctuation-this is to identify the correct thought.

And the "crash landing". Does it be controlled against satellite monsters??..plsss be specific.

7/10.