Yep, some brand new Cards.

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[align=center] The Kazyqueen was ruined, Telos' only method of transportation now a heap of metal.

Omega laughed, the earth shaking in response. He looked down to the injured Queen, plumes of smoke exiting his nostrils. "You have come to slay me, Queen of Blyxwrath, yet you cannot even injure me! I, however, have the power and intelligence to destroy you whenever I desire, and I do. In fact, I have just the way to do so... I play... Final Summoning!"

[spoiler=Lore]Once per duel, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Deck. The maximum amount of cards in your hand is the Level of the selected monster, and, only if you control no other monsters, the selected monster can declare an attack. As long as the selected monster is outside of your Deck, you cannot Summon another monster.

 

The massive dragon's body transformed into dust, covering the corpse of the Queen's sister. The limp body suddenly became animated, and life once again filled Hiyori. She looked to Telos, the dragon reforming, and Hiyori appearing in his hand. There was something different about her, however; she could not be kept alive without the power from Omega, and defeating her would only mean death.

"Now to finish our duel..." Omega began, voice trailing. His left arm and both legs, as well as a large portion of his body, were gone, and he seemed restrained by some invisible force. Then, Hiyori stepped down from the beast's palm and activated her duel disk. The field remained the same, but now Telos understood what was happening; Omega was going to finish dueling through Hiyori! If Telos wished to live, she would have to kill her own sister! Omega laughed yet again, warning Telos that he wouldn't let her have the option. This would be completely his decision, he warned, and any resistance would be crushed.

Telos drew a card, a look of both determination and despair on her face as she thought of snatching life from her sister. "Now, I get rid of my Incendiary Knight and my Heatup Hatchling to Synchro Summon!"

 

"As the cold grasps of Death and Defeat surround thee, an everlasting flame vanquishes all! Synchro Summon! Illuminating Light, Final Flare Dragon!"

The dragon was placed in Defense Position, and Telos was certain to activate the effects of her Material monsters. She was able to get rid of the only low-level monster Omega controlled, and Heatup Hatchling remained on the field, thus leaving her two monsters to face Hiyori, who was treated as a 5000 ATK monster, and Omega himself. Telos was in a tough situation, since all of the monsters were real in this realm, she had to win, or she would die. She had two Face-downs, and she decided to activate one of them. "I attack you, Omega, with my Final Flare Dragon!"

 

"You fool! I have 10,000 ATK! You can't defeat me!"

"...And now I use the effect of Rainbow Life!"

"Damn you..."

 

Telos gained 7200 Life Points, returning to the game. Her monster was still to be destroyed, however, and she grinned. By activating her dragon's effect, she Summoned Final Flare Overlord.

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Final Flare Dragon." Once per turn, you can inflict an amount Damage to your Life Points, in multiples of 500, to place 1 Final Counter on a monster for each multiple of 500 paid. When a monster has an amount of Final Counters on it equal to its level, destroy that monster and gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. By Paying 5000 Life Points, during the 2nd Standby Phase after this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Final Foe" in face-up Attack Position.

 

"... And now I loose 5000 Life Points... To take out Hiyori!"

 

((Yep. I thought a little story would help make up for the poor quality of these cards... I'll make them decent tomorrow I really just wanted to type something, and I'm stuck in my RP.))

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[DragonRyu]

i like the cards and story! im not a good rater so i wont rate LOL i like the pics :)

[thecross]

like em can't see OCG errors

9.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

I take it you pulled the pics from Jazin Kay's archives?

 

anyways for Heatup Hatchling, it's Winged Beast for the type, not Winged-Beast

 

a shame your incendiary knight is only effective against WATER decks

 

I don't see the Final Foe card. But since you had to pay 5000 LP to get it out, I'm sure you're going to make it OPed as hell

 

9.3/10

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Thanx. I dunno why I always put Winged-Beast.

Also, incendiary is effect against all BUT water. It's destroy a non-WATER monster. : P

Final Foe will be OP'ed as hell, considering it takes 4 monsters and 6000 LP total to get out.

So... anyone else wanna rate?

Yeah images from Jazin.

[Keyu_Sensei420]

Ive never seen your work before and I must say I really like it!

 

9.9/10 ^_^

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Thank you! :3

[ProSora]

great pics and like said be little to no errors

9/10

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Thanks!

[jayjack]

Well, you got some OCG errors.

Pretty balanced. What's Final Foe? O.o

Anyway, good job. Though the story kinda confused me. 9/10

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Final Foe is here

 

Story was the ending to a Fan-Fic I never posted here.