A LIGHT single. [The first card I've made in ages, probably has awful OCG]

[Skarlet]

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the level of all LIGHT monster that you Tribute Summon sucessfully by 2. As long as they remain face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of all Level 4 or lower LIGHT monsters on the field by a number equal to thier level times 200, until the end of the turn, this card gains ATK equal to the total amount of ATK lost by those monsters.

 

Credit:

http://tinypic.com/r/nwdb1d/6

[T3RA PROWL3R]

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the level of all LIGHT monster that you Tribute Summon sucessfully by 2 for As long as they remain face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of all Level 4 or lower LIGHT monsters on the field by a number equal to thier level x200. *This card gains ATK equal to the total amount of ATK lost by all LIGHT monsters by this card's effect until the End Phase of your opponent's turn.*

 

Fixed OCG and changed a tiny bit (*'s around what I changed). Also, this card is OP'd because it is increasing it's ATK when it already has 2650.

[Skarlet]

^ The balancing factor there is that the monsters who loose thier ATK don't regain it.Therefor unless your opponent has a clear field already, you're not actually going to get anywhere, Even a full field of level 4 monsters will only give this card a few turns of high attack while leaving your other monsters vulnerable to destruction, unless you change those to defense position quick-smart. in which case. it's probably for the best that this card can still only clear one target per turn, leaving your opponent plenty of chances to bring it's potential attack total down further. Realistically, yes you can do some damaged, but who's to say that you're really in a game winning position.

Also, I only wanted the increase to last until your own end phase, because that further balances it by allowing the opponent a chance to counter attack.

[ragnarok1945]

actually the OCG doesn't look TOO bad

 

since it's been pointed out for the errors, I'll just move onto the effect part

 

mainly it's just an atk gain combined with Cost Down's effect on LIGHT only, but is excellent in any LS decks, so I like it

 

though you should lower its base atk. 2650 is plenty for lv7 already, lower it to 2200ish or something

 

8/10

[Skarlet]

^ Noted, The attack was a bit high, had I saved the card, I'd fix it now