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[Reeceifer2]

My first ever Card its My signiture card and a spell and trap to go with it.

 

 

 

[ProSora]

"All Machine-Type monsters gain 400 ATK Points."

"When this card is Summoned select a card your opponent controls and remove it from play."

"When this card is activated all non-Machine-Type monsters on the field are sent to the Graveyard."

ocg fixed, there is no such thing as Quick-Play trap cards, and very simple effects

4/10

[Reeceifer2]

Thanks for the "constructive criticicm"........ *-*

[ProSora]

well i did correct the mistakes you made o.o

and now you know to have effects more original, also there are no quick-play traps

[Reeceifer2]

I wonder why there are no quick play traps its really pointless dont you think 47474747474747474474774747747474747477474747474747474747474774774747474747477474747474747474774747444477447474747474774747474747474747474774744747747474: the meaning of life

[Quiksilver]

Well, All Trap Cards are Quick-Play, aren't they?

[ragnarok1945]

there's no such thing as quickplay traps

 

both the spell and the trap effect are WAY too basic, give them another effect

 

as for the monster card, 3400 atk is too high if you're not going to give it specific summoning requirements, so lower it to 2800ish or something

 

5/10

[JIMMYTRON]

used the first image already :*(

[Reeceifer2]

You know ragnarok1945 just cos youve been on the forum longer doesnt mean you can tell me to change my effects and no i aint changin them just cos you think there simple =[

[FSBolthof]

I think ragnorok1945 is right and the OCG is horrible and the cards to good. It is way to fake and newby. You are going to hear this a lott if you don't improve it. Life is hard. So don't be so insulted, I heard this to when I began. Just learn from it and adjust it.

Ragnorok1945 knows what he is talking about.

3/10