HERE ARE MY Full Armored Lightning Warrior+EQUIP CARDS

[nasoni]

HERE ARE MY 3 CARDS

Lore: When the Full Armored Warrior is on the field nobody can summon any Dark monster to the field, there Dark monsters there are on the field loses 400 ATK and for each Light monster in the graveyard the Full Armored Warrior gains 100 ATK.

 

PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT:D

[Yugiohrulez!]

Put " " By each monster card name you mention

A few other OCG errors

I say 7/10

[♠Decietful King♠]

A vanilla with an effect you should probably work on that and post the lore then I'll rate

[ragnarok1945]

all the spell support to is boost its atk

 

I find that boring for the effect, you should put another spell support to get the vanilla to do something else

 

7/10

[nasoni]

all the spell support to is boost its atk

 

I find that boring for the effect' date=' you should put another spell support to get the vanilla to do something else

 

7/10

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WHAT IS A VANILLA???

[doommoose]

all the spell support to is boost its atk

 

I find that boring for the effect' date=' you should put another spell support to get the vanilla to do something else

 

7/10

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WHAT IS A VANILLA???

A normal monster with no effect, You gave a vanilla an effect, which is something that, well, just doesn't happen. Make it an effect monster. You also have tons of grammatical errors, and to be honest, no one would ever use the spell support.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

all the spell support to is boost its atk

 

I find that boring for the effect' date=' you should put another spell support to get the vanilla to do something else

 

7/10

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WHAT IS A VANILLA???

 

A Vanilla is a normal monster. I am the leader of a club associated with it. If you want to make Vanillas go to Question Tuts and find my thread, but I believe you're trying to make a Effect Monster. Lightning Warrior is already a card. The effect has bad Official Card Grammer. The support cards are horrid, make it at least 1500 ATK boost.

 

Overall 8/10

[Kato_Zenamara]

This card disgusts me. Lets start with the common sense stuff:

1) Your card has an effect. You know about this site and Yu-Gi-Oh, so you must play it or have some contact with it. So you must know that there are these nifty things called effect cards, which are an obvious option in the Card Maker and that EVERY other topic here has. This card has an effect, as I said before. So, shouldn't it be an effect monster?

 

2) I'm scared to ask how old you are. I'm pretty sure a kindergardener has better grammar capacities than you do.

 

Next, lets go to the more complex things:

1) The "support" cards for this are more basic than the ORIGINAL Yu-Gi-Oh published cards. You are obviously an idiot, have NO capacity for making ANYTHING, or are both.

 

No, I'm not saying that just off THIS topic. I'm saying that based off of THIS topic and EVERY other topic you make.