superspeck Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 1. No commas.2. Pic is OK.3. Boring effect. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 1. No commas.2. Pic is OK.3. Boring effect. 6/10 OK I will put some commas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 1. No commas.2. Pic is OK.3. Boring effect. 6/10 OK I will put some commas Delete the one after "play" and add 1 after "turn". EDIT: I also noticed that you spelled Main as Mane.And "during your draw phase" isn't specific enough. Try "during your next draw phase." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 You mean the Fire Angel. Pretty OP'ed, make its effect "remove from play 2 monsters". 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 You mean the Fire Angel. Pretty OP'ed' date=' make its effect "remove from play 2 monsters". 7/10[/quote'] OK i will fix it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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speck Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Not bad 7/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 You put a space after Pyro.You spelled Main Phase as Mane Phase.You put draw phase in the place ow Draw phase.Boring effect.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 You put a space after Pyro.You spelled Main Phase as Mane Phase.You put draw phase in the place ow Draw phase.Boring effect.7/10 OK i will fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 You also misspelled Angel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 You also misspelled Angel. OK i will fix that as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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