Mr. Jarro the Ancient Scientist and his Creations (New Set)

[FeralSnake]

The first 3 cards of a new set I am working on. Tell me what you truly think.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK monsters you control in face-up attack position. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage application is not applied). This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1 or Standby Phase, while this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can draw one card. While this card is face-up all "Mr. Jarro's" cards you control gain 500 DEF.

[spoiler=Mr. Jarro's Mechanical Warrior]

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-When your opponent activates a Spell card that requires the tribute of a DARK attribute monster, increase your life points by 1500.

[spoiler=Mr. Jarro's Constricting Tentacle Trap]

 

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Pictures found here: http://www.magicdeckvortex.com/art_update_2009_05.htm

[Keeyan_Corbitt]

not bad. it seems that Mr. Jarro the Ancient Scientist is alil OP'ed. i mean once he is summoned, he is never leaving until the player tributes him.

OCG seems flawless to me

 

nice idea. 9/10

[FeralSnake]

not bad. it seems that Mr. Jarro the Ancient Scientist is alil OP'ed. i mean once he is summoned' date=' [b']he is never leaving until the player tributes him.[/b]

OCG seems flawless to me

 

nice idea. 9/10

 

He can be killed by monster effects still, and his effect(s), ATK, and DEF aren't really that spectacular.

[FSBolthof]

That first card can almost not be destroyed. That make it seem unreal. Like the idea.

 

7.5/10

[jahnf987]

not bad. it seems that Mr. Jarro the Ancient Scientist is alil OP'ed. i mean once he is summoned' date=' [b']he is never leaving until the player tributes him.[/b]

OCG seems flawless to me

 

nice idea. 9/10

 

He can be killed by monster effects still, and his effect(s), ATK, and DEF aren't really that spectacular.

 

Did you even read the effect?

[ragnarok1945]

1st card is a bit Oped since there's no way to get it off the field without tributing

 

so I'd change the spell/trap immunity effect to it's only immune to the spells/traps that specifically designate a target, then everything should be just fine

 

9/10

[FeralSnake]

not bad. it seems that Mr. Jarro the Ancient Scientist is alil OP'ed. i mean once he is summoned' date=' [b']he is never leaving until the player tributes him.[/b]

OCG seems flawless to me

 

nice idea. 9/10

 

He can be killed by monster effects still, and his effect(s), ATK, and DEF aren't really that spectacular.

 

Did you even read the effect?

 

Well, seeing as I made the card, I would say no, no I did not read the effect.

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage application is not applied). This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards.

 

The effects of Spell and Trap cards, not monsters, although the effect has been changed so it no longer matters.

 

And Ragnarok, the effect has been changed to something very close fitting your description.

[ragnarok1945]

that's better, NOW I can raise my rate to 9.6/10