Joshua Evans Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 here is my forth card to see my first 3 cards go to the third topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshua Evans Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 plz reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Ok, the grammar is eally really bad, i mean bad. The pic is ok, but the grammar really kills it for me, i'm sorry if I sound mean. If you wan't I can help you, I bet everyone else will help to.3/10sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 here make it this way "Decrease the DEF of all Dragon-Type Monsters to 0 and increase thier ATK by half the DEF points" so you see you dont write any flavour text in the effect like berserk or mad or anything and you write ATK and DEF and not attck and defence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshua Evans Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 how about my new one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshua Evans Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 or this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Sorry, but the last 2 are not too good. the first is way overpowererd, and has bad ocg. Then the last has bad grammar and is not worth it, normal monsters arent worth rating, there is nothing to rate. So, i'm sorry, but 1st gets 0/10 for me, and secound doesent get a ratin, i am really sorry =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Not good.......at all............=(You coudl make lots of improvement, like your grammar! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 i can bet that you never played the game or even seen a real card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Both are overpowered. The Trap Card has grammar problems, and the pics are good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 um, all the thins you needed to know, have been said, so ill just say that there are threads to help you make cards =) 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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