Fixed Nelge (Wanna make it perfect)

[rate405]

[ragnarok1945]

change Nelge to this card

 

life points should be Life Points

 

and not 000 atk, just say 0 atk. Not to mention this needs specific summoning requirements

 

6/10

[Flexh]

change Nelge to this card

 

life points should be Life Points

 

and not 000 atk' date=' just say 0 atk. Not to mention this needs specific summoning requirements

 

6/10

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What I was gonna say

[kilonept]

here you get this picture

[Hyenn]

Each and per mosnter means the same so drop one of them (Yugioh uses each so drop per monster),

Also second effect:

There are two possibilities wether you want it to count as Direct Attack (1) or just LP damage (2):

Version 1:

When this card is destroyed, deal Lifepoint damage to your opponent, equal to this card's ATK, this damage is considired a Direct Attack.

(I don't suggest this one)

Version 2:

When this card is destroyed, deal Lifepoint damage to your opponent, equal to this card's ATK.

(I think you probbably meant this)

 

I like the card, I think it is pretty good, I think it is balanced rather creative and nice, though I would personally say it needs less stars (say 8 or 9) but its fine with 10, too.

[UrWorstNightmare009]

I like the use of the Pic

 

000 should be 0 (ALWAYS)

Instead of saying 'Nelge' say 'this card'

'life points' should be 'Life Points'

'attack is.' shouls be 'attack is equal to.'

 

It's okay for a Lvl2 member, I should know =P

Anyways, 7.1/10 (Fix OCG!)