chris78909 Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 ok here is my card hope u like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Ok, here is how I think it should go:This card cannot be Normal Summond or set. When this card is Special Summond, You may discard 1 monster cad from your hand to inflict damage to your opponent's Life Point equal to half of the ATK of the sent monster. I like the card some, but there are some things that need fixing, so untill further notice, i give it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 ok thx im not very good at doing my effects well :(thats the only thing that kinda lets me down Edit: ok ive change it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Thans, hey, if you ever want help, just ask, BtW, don't put that thing about dong that again this turn there. It kind of hurts it in my mind. SRY if I am starting to annoy you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 no its ok i like getting help :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Overpowered and bad OCG, decent picture and idea, good effect. 6/10. Reduce his attack or add a drawback in his effect, and fix the OCG according to Yankeefan's suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Yeah....you can work on your grammar......I like the idea, and the effect, but its a little overpowered....=p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Good pic, overpowered, monster card needs to be capitalized. Add side effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 when you are writing a number in a card effect, it must be in numerical form, (1) not (one)you get a 8/10 for the card =) keep it up! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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