packed Posted March 8, 2010 Report Share Posted March 8, 2010 Well, here it is. This is my first set of cards, yet alone the first cards i've ever made. Please, if ive done something wrong, please tell me so i can learn and improve. Thanks Remember, these are my first cards so i know there not very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted March 8, 2010 Report Share Posted March 8, 2010 Cool cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
packed Posted March 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 Cool cards. 9/10 9/10! really?Thanks! anything i could improve on them though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Well there grammer problems, so here a little list of correct word forms: Inflict 1000 points of damage to your oponent (Life Points are not mentioned) This card attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Well basic stuff, but there's one more thing: Spirit type monsters have there effects returned them to the hand at the end of your turn, and you mush stat this in every Spirit type Monsters, such as this. Return this card to the hand at the end of your turn. Or something like that. Aside form that, good cards, I would definately wanna use these. 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakonis2988 Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 These cards aren't bad. like frybread002 said, there are some grammer mistakes, but that can be fixed pretty easily. i was wondering what the card that didn't show up is, though. 8/10 for me. {edit} i also don't really know what your "Space" card is supposed to do. do light monsters gain 1000 atk/def, or do all monsters gain 1000 atk/def for every light type monster on the field. that needs to be cleared up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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