Variety Cards (Some Help)

[OnyLigtho]

Well I'm not good in English like I was before, but, I want to share this cards to bring me some help to perfection them (Grammar and those things).

I made a Water Deck and I have some ideas, but I don't know how to write the effect ot the card correctly.

 

Let's start:

 

White Submarine

Machine/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1300/DEF 1100

Effect: When this card is destroyed in battle in Attack Position, the damage difference is decrease to your oponent's Life Points.

 

Evolutive Slime

Aqua/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1600

Effect: Every time this monster destroy a monster as a result of battle, increase the ATK of this card equal to the Nivel of the destroyed monster x 100 points.

 

The Fury of the Ocean

Trap

:During your Battle Phase send your WATER monster from the Field to the Graveyard and inflict to your oponent's Life Points damage equal to the number of WATER monster removed from the Field x 1000 points. You can pay 500 Life Points per each monster destroyed by this effect and Special Summon it to the Field.

 

Great Penguin Iceberg

Aqua/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 1500

Effect: Every time this monster destroy an oponent monster as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Ice Token" on your oponent Field (Aqua/WATER/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). The tokens can't be used as a Tribute in a Tribute Summon.

 

Abusive Tentacle

Trap

:This card is activated only during your oponent Draw Phase. Remove 1 card form your hand to the Graveyard in change of your oponent drawed card.

 

Poison Fish

Fish/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 1600

Effect: During your Battle Phase you can decrease the ATK of 1 oponent monster by 500 points.This monster can't attack the same turn this effect was activated.

 

Eel Shark Moss

Sea Serpent/WATER/Level 5/ATK 2000/DEF 2300

Effect: Every time this monster destroy an oponent monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card form your Deck.

 

White Sword Fish

Fish/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 1000

Effect: During your Battle Phase you can increase the ATK of 1 of your monster by 500 points.This monster can't attack the same turn this effect was activated.

 

Miraculous Water

Spell

: Increase your Life Points by 300 points per each monster card on your side of the Field.

 

I'll put some other later, but now I would like U help me to fix this card, to make them equilibrate or non so powered, or more useful, grammar etc.

 

Thanks for Ur help!

[GraveHorizon]

Here are some examples for now. Bold is optional.

 

Evolutive Slime

Aqua/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1600

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card equal to equal to its Level x 100.

 

Great Penguin Iceberg

Aqua/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 1500

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, Special Summon 1 "Ice Token" to your opponent's side of the Field (Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). This token cannot be used as a Tribute in a Tribute Summon.

 

Eel Shark Moss

Sea Serpent/WATER/Level 5/ATK 2000/DEF 2300

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card.

 

Miraculous Water

Spell

Increase your Life Points by 300 for each monster you control.

[OnyLigtho]

Thank U so much! I really appreaciate this, GraveHorizon. Maybe I can post some other n.ñ! See you then!