Hellfire monsters, Arise!

[Specter54]

These are the start of a set I came up with, stemming from my Spirit of Hellfire card. There's only five, but I'll add more. Could anyone improve my OCG, or give me picture/card ideas?

 

Hellfire Soldier, LV4 Warrior

During your opponent's turn, this card gains 800 ATK. During your End Phase, you can inflict 600 damage to your opponent. If you do so, this card loses 1000 ATK. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon one level 3 "Hellfire" monster from your hand or either player's Graveyard.

 

Hellfire Mercenary, LV6 Warrior

During your opponent's turn, this card gains 1000 ATK. During your End Phase, you can deal your opponent damage in increments of 100 (max. 1500). This card loses attack equal to the amount of damage you dealt to your opponent by this effect until your next Standby Phase.

 

Hellfire Ninja, LV3 Warrior-Tuner

During your opponent's turn, this card gains 500 ATK. During your End Phase, you can deal 200 damage to your opponent. If you do so, this card is destroyed during your next End Phase. Whenever this card would be destroyed, you can discard one card to negate its destruction.

 

Hellfire Spirit, LV5 Spellcaster

During your opponent's turn, this card gains 1500 ATK. During your End Phase, you can inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, this card's effcts are negated until your next End Phase.

 

Hellfire Dragon, LV8 Dragon-Synchro

1 Tuner + 1 or more FIRE attribute non-Tuner monsters

During your opponent's turn, this card's attack doubles. During your End Phase, you can inflict 2000 damage to your opponent. If you do so, this card's effects are negated during your opponent's next turn, and you cannot inflict damage with this card's effect during your next End Phase. If a "Hellfire" Monster on your side of the field is destroyed, both players take 400 damage.

[frooy9]

hey man thats preety hot

[Squirrel Girl]

Ocg errors pics are average 7/10 - 1/10 = 6/10 my rate

[zwright777]

Like the name, since I'm not an improvising critic, you get a 9/10. Nice job!

[arifpr]

Nice. 8/10

 

BTW, does Hellfire soldier regain its attack, or does it permanently lose it every time?

[Zen-Psi]

Ocg errors through the cards and decent pics

 

6.1/10

[inFAMOUS cole]

Like the name' date=' since I'm not an improvising critic, you get a 9/10. Nice job!

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whoah whoah its not that people are critiszing cards we are trying to help them improve their cards to make them all ultimate

now then with that being said i like the idea of ure hellfire monster in fact i love it now then all u need to do is perhaps touchen up the OcG just a bit and keep makin more of these cards and ull be great

[ragnarok1945]

for attributes (like in the synchro for summoning material), just say FIRE monster, no need to say FIRE attribute monster

 

plus for Hellfire Dragon you said it's a lv8 synchro, but from the card you clearly gave it NINE stars

 

9/10

[Specter54]

for attributes (like in the synchro for summoning material)' date=' just say FIRE monster, no need to say FIRE attribute monster

 

plus for Hellfire Dragon you said it's a lv8 synchro, but from the card you clearly gave it NINE stars

 

9/10

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Sorry, it's suposed to be nine stars. And thanks for the OCG; I wasn't sure if Attribute was still needed.

[MibeR]

fun ,,good cartds 9/10

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Your card making skills are one of a LV 5. Except for the OCG. Just work on that and with newby bonus it would have been 10/10, but with OCG minus 9/10

[gustavosuarez]

i like the idea and the concept. cards are good and pics very impressive:P 9/10

[TheBlackHole10000]

Nice! I like the names, the monsters, and the art style.

Good job dude! Keep it up!