First shreds of a deck

[Jandase Apep]

 

I needed a little help wording the card, but tell me whatcya think!

 

 

Text: When this card is activated, Special Summon up to three Monsters from your Graveyard with "Serpent" or "Snake" in their names. The controller of this card takes 100 damage times the total star points of the Summoned Monsters

[ragnarok1945]

not too impressive of a pic

 

You mean The 100* the combined levels of the monsters Summoned.

 

A small price to pay, and it's still OPed since you didn't put restrictions on the summoned monsters

 

7/10

[Jandase Apep]

Hrhm, my boyfriend picked the picture out. I just had the itchings to make a card. A practice card if you will.

 

Wait, what? How would I write it? 100x? I'm so uncertain! I just can't get the wording right :S Hrhm, combined does better. Thank you!

 

There aren't very many high leveled "serpent" or "snake" cards. This card would not include "Snakes" so Vennominon and Vennominaga wouldn't be able to be summon (The latter doubly so because of its effect). Which leaves the Roaring Ocean Snake as the highest I suppose, but the rest are three and four level. Then Serpent, which I suppose can go up to eight, yes.

 

So, at the least you summon three level three monsters, which is 900 Life Points damage.

 

At the most, you can summon three eight level monsters is 2400

 

 

 

If you have that many level eights in the graveyard or in your deck to start with, I suppose this card would be a tad over powered....

 

Hrhm. I could up the damage received, but then the card may feel a little unplayable. Its catering to a rather small section of the Duel Monster world. Perhaps I should cut out "serpent" and just leave "snake". That way, the high powered sea serpent and dragon monster(s) wouldn't unbalance the card, leaving the lower level snake monsters.

 

Thank you for the input!