Cobrarat Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 These are 2 cards from the "galaxy Dragon" archtype that will appear in my booster. In total i have made 3 of them but still a lot to do.Anyway rate,hate,etc... Lore:During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card destroys a monster by battle inflict 600 damage to your opponent's Life Points. During each of your End Phases discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard if you cannot this card is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 What a nice cards,, great..but lord meteor,is too powerfull.and make a different effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobrarat Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 What a nice cards' date=', great..but lord meteor,is too powerfull.and make a different effects[/quote'] How can lord meteor be to powerfull he just got a piercing effect that not that strong or is it the burn effect your talking about?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 really good cards but the first one has to have a little drawback9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Hand should be hand also you didn't have to say "to the Graveyard". If you're discarding, it automatically means the card goes from your hand to the graveyard 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 First sentence in the first card, you only need "This card dies piercing damage" Second you dont need "opponent's Life Points" just opponent. After Graveyard you need a . and big I in If. Good pic on first but i dont like the second card's pic so i give these 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 The effect of Lord Meteor is a little wierd, seeing as you can do Burn Damage and Battle damage. I say increase the End Phase payment somehow. Either that, or decrease the 600 points to 300, or remove it all together. your choice in my opinion. The rest of the stuff is fine, as the pictures are awesome. However, there are some errors in the first one. "During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card destroys a monster by battle ,inflict 600 damage to your opponent's Life Points. During each of your End Phases, discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard. If you cannot ,this card is destroyed." ^Fixed to the best of my ability. Score: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBlackHole10000 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 First card is balanced, but the second card can destroy your opponents spells and traps as a way to save itself from destruction, which makes it too powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Seen pic before but effect are cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobrarat Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Seen pic before but effect are cool 9/10 Thx for the rating but finding pic's that other people didn't used allready is very hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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