bighope Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Comment Please This monster cannot be attacked by Plant-Type monsters. If this monster is removed from the field you can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 Plant-Type monster that you control. If this monster is Special Summoned you can Special Summon 1 Plant-Type monster from your Deck with 1500 DEF or less. For every Plant-Type monster that you control this card gains 1 Level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Has alot of errors, for starters, defense= DEF, plant type=PLANT, plant should be PLANT, and also, I think the DEF is too high for a Level one, also, for me it is kinda boring.... i give it....... 6.1/10, sorry, I just dont feel it.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 I changed it, but it just ain't doin' it for me neather Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 There are still a couple Grammer Errors, but it is still better than last time, I raise it to 6.5/10, which I know will not make tht much of a diff, but still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 PLANT monsters should be Plant-Type monsters. Remember, plant isn't an attribute special summon should be Special Summon, grave should be Graveyard 1500 def is too much for lv1, I'd have made it lv3 instead 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted March 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Fixed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Sry for the PLANT, and also, WAAAY better, i give it a hmmm.... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 OCG FIX:This monster cannot be attacked by Plant-Type monsters. If this monster is removed from the field you can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 Plant-Type monster that you control. If this monster is Special Summoned you can Special Summon 1 Plant-Type monster from your Deck with 1500 DEF or less. For every Plant-Type monster that you control this card gains 1 Level. There is a correct OCG fix for the future type, special summon, deck, level and tributing should always be capatalized. Also One should be 1 or any number should be in its numerical form. My Rate ~7/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 sweet card, creative and long effects good, 9/10 nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 could you say how it could be better? i am open to suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 The OCG needs a bit of work, and the picture is slightly blurry. I do like the balance of the card however...still, nothing pops out for me. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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