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gizmo00999 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 0/10 Horrible picture, OCG errors, OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 all the effects are too OPed, add more drawbacks to them along with major OCG errors, use the OCG thread to help you 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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otto194 Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 hmm like the idea but pics are blurry/squished WAY too OPed you need more draw backs OCG errors there are threads and such to help you with this kind of stuff 3/10 nice job though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 your new card still has the capitalization errors effect remains boring for it, so it only gets 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealyugiohmaker Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 [/img] BTW, thanks for the quite harsh comments... Im not mad because it is for me to become more better in making cards..lol[/img] forgot to put her attack[/img] my newest card for my notre dame deck[/img] sorry for posting hail 3 times....got confused with what i need to press...sorry[/img] If there's a good guys, there should be bad guys like this dragon...Its boring if there's no rebel in my deck and since my notre dame's monsters effect is to inflict damage and deplete opponent's deck when they sent to the graveyard, this dragon will be perfect...if my other notre dame monsters got destroyed, they're effect will be activated because of this card..http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4199/500156m.jpg[/img] Lore:1 tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner “Notre Dame” monstersWhen this card is Synchro summoned, destroy all cards on the field. Inflict 500 life points to both players for each card destroyed. Once per turn, you can send the top card of your opponent’s deck to have this card gain the following effect: Trap- your opponent can’t draw on his next draw phase. Spell- your opponent discards all cards in his/her hands. Monster- inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of the monster.[/img] lore:1 tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner “Notre Dame” monstersWhen this card is Synchro summoned, destroy all cards on the field. Inflict 500 life points to both players for each card destroyed. Once per turn, you can send the top card of your opponent’s deck to have this card gain the following effect: Trap- your opponent can’t draw on his next draw phase. Spell- your opponent discards all cards in his/her hands. Monster- inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of the monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 there's capitalization errors on the card (special summon should be Special Summon) you're on your way, but it's still not quite there yet 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealyugiohmaker Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 [/img] equip card...:) [/img] the winning card is this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 see there's still the capitalization errors, plus the 2nd one seems to look suite for Any Other Cards or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealyugiohmaker Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 [/img] [/img] [/img] the royal family....:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I hope you know you COULD have just edited your first post instead of doing it this way still the capitalization errors, like graveyard should be Graveyard, life points should be Life Points, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealyugiohmaker Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 [/img][/img][/img]sorry for the capitalization....im new in this ...:)[/img] that's my last card so far...anyone who can give me a nice name for my next cards for my notre dame deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 *facepalms* edit your first post and these look better for pop culture, since you admitted to Notre Dame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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