Rusty Shovel Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 The chapter seems to be lacking description. Other than that it's seems ok. Feels a little rushed though. If you glance at a novel, you'll notice most chapters are around 10-15 pages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poseidon© Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 The chapter seems to be lacking description. Other than that it's seems ok. Feels very rushed though. If you glance at a novel' date=' you'll notice most chapters are around 10-15 pages.[/quote'] Just giving my critique but... bolded. It didn't linger on things long enough. Otherwise, nice job. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Well, I don't like how it's a lot like all those other zombie apocalypse things and too orthodox. But if it's violent it may be good to some point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Speech should be on a new paragraph. Or so says famous authors..... If you're going to make your own TV series, you'd have to make a book and then show it to a director, etc. If it's a series, you'd best at least be far ahead. Remember, DO NOT publish illegally. You should show it to a Publisher, if he doesn't want to, show it to another, and then so on. In that case, don't give up. J.K Rowling had to go to publishers for an ENTIRE year to get her first book published. Don't count on a TV series. At least not for a year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Speech should be on a new paragraph. Or so says famous authors..... If you're going to make your own TV series' date=' you'd have to make a book and then show it to a director, etc. If it's a series, you'd best at least be far ahead. Remember, DO NOT publish illegally. You should show it to a Publisher, if he doesn't want to, show it to another, and then so on. In that case, don't give up. J.K Rowling had to go to publishers for an ENTIRE year to get her first book published. Don't count on a TV series. At least not for a year.[/quote'] That's the best way to publish a book, but if you just can't get a publisher to print your book, you can publish on Amazon. If you don't like that approach, you can self-publish (it is most certainly NOT illegal), if you have enough funds to take that approach. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 lol whoops i forgot to mention that this is the ruftdraft, not the finished version, not to mension the chapter i posted isnt finished lol, i kinda posted it a little erlier than expected so ididnt get a chance to post all of it, but considering most of you are giving bad reveiws maybe its for the best that i dont post anymore of my book -_-i do thank you all for your suggestions and i would like you all to know that they have been taken to mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 One more thing. You seriousssssly need to fix your grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 my grammer is fine and do u not read, ill say it again just for u merciful "This is the Ruftdraft" meaning that not all of the words are going to be perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Such irony I see when you say your grammar is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 I don't mean your story, I mean YOU. I can HARDLY understand YOUR grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 my grammar, i speak perfect english, i cut words down to shorter versions so i dont have to type the whole word out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 Well, that's your problem, oh so Future Author. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 future author? wtf, im an author now not in the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 but as for publishing i am going to be going to a local publisher for what they call a "Look-over" where the publisher looks over your book, tells you a few things that may need fixing and then you fix them and then they give you the decision, my friend Josh told me i have a pretty good chance of this book getting published for the simple fact is he said it was original, i know its hard to make a zombie book original so maybe there was something i did within the book to make it origianl lol, but anyway that isnt until April 22nd so i got plenty of time to look it over myself and make some small changes. Wish me luck =)oh and when i said local i meant a state wide publisher, not local as in city local but state local, just sayin in case i confused anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted April 14, 2010 Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 Ah, right *Nods*. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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