Limited Edition KING Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 [align=center]I'm not sure bout the text so if you say its bad can you please explain how it is bad? besides that I feel this is one of my best and a personal favourite =D [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I like it. ;D Lighting is off, Depth is meh.Only negatives from me. o_OFlow is awesome. ;D Your best. :3You're getting heaps better. ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 You either put a really bad glow/shadow around the figure, or your render is crap. Either way, it doesn't look good. Flow on the left is strong, the flow on the right is incredibly weak. Any sort of flow you might have had is interrupted by the text anyway, which effectively stops my eye. Lighting is also poorly done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Getting better from previous.. No lightning. Flow is greatDepth is badThe Text is horrible Nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I have asked for you to explain why the text is bad because I don't know if its the positioning of the text or just the text itself. and can anyone explain what the depth is? and maybe post an example if possible? I am thankful for your comments I am trying to get better just there are some things I don't know of yet such as depth and I think im getting on the right track with lighting but its going slowly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Text Itself.It's too boring and sticks out too much.Depth is like, 3D-ness of the tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Nope. EDIT: Or maybe a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 JG, you're excellent at CnCing.xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Inorite? But in tags as bad as this, it's almost hard to CnC. No offense though ;D But you have a sort of lighting, but all other basics are bad or non-existant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Depth is like' date=' 3D-ness of the tag.[/quote'] Excuse me? :? And I HATE saying this but I have to say it... read more tuts. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Depth is not 3d-ness... It makes the art feel full (non-flat) and gives perspective. Your flow is okay, but the random C4Ds in the bg kill it and make it messy... Use text subtly like in the tag in my sig or look at Omni's old work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 It makes the art feel full (non-flat) and gives perspective. This is what I meant.I just couldn't explain it properly. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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