Terror of the Deep

[arifpr]

Here's a little side project I've been working on. Tell me what you think, suggest pics, and plz check my ocg.

 

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, you could destroy one monster on your oponent's side of the field.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, you could add up to 2 "Abyss" monsters to your hand.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, increase this card's level by 2 until the end phase.

You can normal summon this card without a tribute by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster form your hand to the Graveyard, you could special summon one level 4 or lower "Abyss" monster from the Graveyard. That monster cannot attack, and it is destroyed during the End Phase.

1 "Abyss" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. This card gains 200 ATK for every "Abyss" monster in your Graveyard. During each of your end phases, return one "Abyss" monster from your Graveyard to your deck.

[ragnarok1945]

end phase should be End Phase

 

normal summon should be Normal Summon

 

tribute should be Tribute

 

special summon should be Special Summon

 

deck should be Deck

 

but for the most part the OCG is just fine

 

Abyss Serpent Dragon's effect is a little dull though, maybe give it another effect

 

8.5/10

[otto194]

okay OCG errors already stated your wording is good though :) just the cap errors :) hope to see mroe cards from you great pics awesome job :) 8.9/10

[Specter54]

Most OCG is good, and you can already fix most of it, so Ill talk to you later. But I think you need a different pic for the Ambusher, you need more cards, and the Archetype is a bit awkward. more tomorrow, man.

7.6/10

[NightGuardian1764]

The OCG, and pic is good except Abyss Chariot

 

Where you can add up to 2 "Abyss" monsters to your hand? from your Graveyard or Deck?

[MibeR]

great pics with balanced effect

9/10