Weer432 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 This is my new set the exiled warriors!Exiled Warrior- Ryo-001 Exiled Warrior- Daichi-002 Exiled Warrior- Harumi-003 Exiled Warrior- Anna-004 Exiled Warrior's Spirit Shield-005 A Warrior's Arrival From Exile-006 Exiled Warrior- Queen Sayo-007 Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned, or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 "Exiled Warrior" monsters you control to the Graveyard. When you destroy an opponent's monster you can equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card gains the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster. Exiled Warrior- Lord Hikaru-008 lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 "Exiled Warrior" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned you can special summon one level 6 or lower "Exiled Warrior" monster from your deck. If this card is on the same side of he field as 'Exiled Warrior- Queen Sayo' it gains 500 ATK and DEF for each "Exiled Warrior" monster in the Graveyard. Exiled Warrior's Dragon- Death-009 Early Grave-010 Exiled Warrior- Ares-011 Exiled Warrior- Overlord Laharl-012 lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned, or Set. This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of 'Overlord Summoning'. All "Exiled Warrior" monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF. This card can attack all of your opponent's monsters in one turn. If there is no monsters on your opponent's side of the field this monster cannot attack until your next battle phase. Overlord Summoning-013 Swarm!-014 A Warrior's Chain-015 Hammer Of The Warrior-016 Death Hole-017 Small Trap Hole-018 Exiled Warrior- Kat-019Lore This card is treated as a spellcaster while in your hand, or on the field.When this card is summoned you can special summon 1 "Exiled Warrior" From your deck. When this card is destroyed by paying 500 lifepoints you can Special Summon 1 'Exiled Warrior- Kat'(besides this one) From your Deck, Graveyard, or Hand. Dark King Ragnarok-020 Story: The dark king Ragnarok has become king o the land from the death of the real king. The kings warriors have all come to fight him, and destroy him. The Dark king has decided to exile all of the kings old warriors and make his own. These warriors will rise to the challenge and defeat this king.Sequel set: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-193843.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Welcome to YCM! Pretty good for a newcomer, unless you were like me and didn't join this website until a year after you discovered it. Consult the spoiler for extra info:[spoiler=Fixxed OCG 'n' stuff]Exiled Warrior - Ryo: - Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from you hand to the Graveyard to remove from play 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Exiled Warrior - Daichi - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when 1 or more of your "Exiled Warrior" monsters has been destroyed and sent to the graveyard by a card effect. If you control another "Exiled Warrior" monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. Exiled Warrior - Harumi - When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Exiled Warrior" monster from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack position. Increase the ATK of all "Exiled Warrior" monsters on your side of the field by 400 for as long as this card remains face-up on the field. Exiled Warrior - Anna - Each time this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, increase the ATK of this card by 300. The cards were too OP'd, so I changed the effects a little and fixxed the OCG. Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 1st card pic is overused change may to can for the most part the OCG errors are just limited to capitalization, so that's fine for a new member problem is none of the effect have drawbacks to them. Yes the effects aren't THAT powerful, but slight drawbacks are needed nonetheless 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Updated 1st pic and fixed ocg, thanx for the welcome!:Dthe reason most of the effects are a bit overpowered is because the actual monster ATK is low Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 New cards added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 twice new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Grim Reaper is OPed with all that summoning power, and it can apply to ANY monster, it's too easy to swarm the field. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 yeah i've decided to delete grim reaperthe rival of my set: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-193002.html Soldier set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Added leader of the Exiled Warriors! Laharl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 You have Some OCG but not too bad and may need to reword them bt for OCG cheack out my Signature 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weer432 Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 set is finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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