MrViscious Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 So erm, tell me what you think. I've never done anything like this before. Woo. I'm thinking of making an entire Forlorn set, I know Fiends get their fair share of cards but I really do love them. Is there anyway to make the text on the card...Bolder? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 WELCOME TO YCM!!! The OCG isn't too bad. I'll fix it right. (Also, there aren't a whole lot of LV8 Synchros, cuz most tuners are LV3. Once per turn, you can send one DARK monster from your hand to the Graveyard to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. You may not Normal Summon or Set the turn this effect is activated. This card is WAY too UP'd. Your opponent looses 500 Life Points while you lose a summon (Probably a 1600 - 1800 ATK monster)? That just isn't right. Creepy picture. Where did you find it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrViscious Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Thanks very much, I'll give it a quick fix...Hrm, maybe do you think. Nixing the side effect of not being able to summon or set? As for the picture, I have a habit of collecting really creepy pictures I find online.Dropped the Level and the attack. Whadda think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Personally I like it a lot. Most synchros to me are OP and this is one that seems less overkill than the others. 8/10. Some OCG issues but nothing too serious. Sweet pic! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Heh So i Got A Little Bored Tonight Just Started Making Random Cards Huge Gundam Fanatic Btw Hope Ya Like Don't post cards on other peoples topics. Personally I think its a good card for a new member. To make it better, I suggest you think of a more complicated effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Thanks very much' date=' I'll give it a quick fix...Hrm, maybe do you think. Nixing the side effect of not being able to summon or set? As for the picture, I have a habit of collecting really creepy pictures I find online.Dropped the Level and the attack. Whadda think?[img']http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3995/501639.jpg[/img] LV6 is good. Try raising its ATK to 2400. I would also add another effect (NOT the one you had before), because it is a Synchro monster, which usually doesn't have 1 effect. How about . . . _____ Increase the ATK of all DARK monsters (except this card) by 500 while this card is face-up on the field. Also, not a big fan of imageshack. You could try deviantART.com. There are usually pretty good pictures there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrViscious Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Something Quick and a Quick Fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I'll find a pic for the next card you make (hopefully sometime tonight). NEW CARD(S): Forlorn Hope shouldn't gain ATK from its own effect. After the word "control" and before the word "by" on the bottom line, there should be a "(except this card)". Because then it would be too strong w/ 3200 ATK. Forlorn Lover OCG Fix:When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card during the End Phase of the turn it was destroyed. Hope that makes them better. (OMG, Dead Kitty.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrViscious Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 I see what you mean. I however have an interesting idea1 Fiend Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can send one DARK monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the attack of All face up DARK monsters you control by 800 until the end of the Turn.During your Main Phase 1 you can inflict 1000 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points if you do, this Monster cannot attack during this Turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 not bad of a start for a new member it's just that the effect is UPed. 500 burn is very small, not worth the loss of a DARK monster. You should at least make it 1000 burn 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrViscious Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 Two More, Tuners this time. Forlorn Promise Forlorn Peace Forlorn Passion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 don't give us the links use the card maker the c/p the code in here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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