Blue Eyes Zombie Dragon

[Horologia]

Im using a zombie deck, and each time i got my "Red Eyes Zombie Dragon" card in my hands, i think "Why isn´t there a blue eyes zombie...?"

 

TADA! Here it is xD

 

 

Of course, best to use together with "Zombie World" ;)

 

So, comments? Things i should improve? Im happy with everything :D

[shadow wind]

spelling eror

use periods

ocg eror 4/10

[Riryoku-Diachi]

Some grammar errors. tribute* not tribut and destroys* not destroyes. The first time you wrote zombie-type but the second you did not add a hypen. (Not sure which is OCG correct. Without the hypen I think... I could be wrong.) Card should not be capitalized. Last sentence needs a period. If its based on Blue-Eyes shouldn't he have 3000 ATK, not 2400 like Red-Eyes?

 

Nice concept, needs a little work. 6.5/10.

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

The only problem I have is it isn't white and doesn't have blue eyes. I'll ease my grammar nazi side but overall it's a good card

[Horologia]

Hey, thanks for quick answears... ^^

 

@Shadowwind:

Yeah... your rigth, but english isn´t my mouther tounge so it´s a little bit hard for me... but i will improve ^^

 

@Riryoku-Diachi:

It´s based on Blue-eyes, but i´d liked to create a card wich is easier to use. and if i use the 3000 ATK of this card with the "only one tribute" clause i wont make much friends, eh? ^^

Once it destroyes a few zombie monsters (And thanks to zombie world he would only have such :P) it will increase it´s ATK much further than blue eyes ^^

 

@JadenxAtemYAoi:

I changed the colour of the eyes with GIMP, but i see what you mean, looks more like black ^^'

And yeah... its not white xD

[gizmo00999]

alright:

 

OCG FIX:

You can Tribute Summon this card by Tributing only 1 Zombie-Type Monster. Each time this card Destroys a Zombie-Type Monster, This card gains 400ATK

 

Picture: 4/10 (i can barely see the dragon, and it doesn't look card-ish)

Attack and Defense: 8/10 (Really Balanced, nice work!)

Attribute,types, and effect: 7/10 (Attribute is light, wtf? when did zombies come from heaven? :D )

OCG: 4/10 (Bad)

Realism: 6/10 (if u would fix everything, i believe it would be 10/10 :D )

 

Overall: 5,8/10

Fix everything, and it will be about 7/10

[Merci]

Follow some tutorials, then colorize it to blue. Fix your OCG, I'm sure there's a sticky thread about that somewhere in a section.

 

Anyway, I'm just gonna give you 6/10, for now.

[PANDORUM™]

I've used that pic before, and it's not the best, the idea is kinda original it's been done before, theres grammer errors but i can still understand what it means, maybe 400 is too much, 100-200

 

6.9/10

[Riryoku-Diachi]

Hey' date=' thanks for quick answears... ^^

 

@Shadowwind:

Yeah... your rigth, but english isn´t my mouther tounge so it´s a little bit hard for me... but i will improve ^^

 

@Riryoku-Diachi:

It´s based on Blue-eyes, but i´d liked to create a card wich is easier to use. and if i use the 3000 ATK of this card with the "only one tribute" clause i wont make much friends, eh? ^^

Once it destroyes a few zombie monsters (And thanks to zombie world he would only have such :P) it will increase it´s ATK much further than blue eyes ^^

 

@JadenxAtemYAoi:

I changed the colour of the eyes with GIMP, but i see what you mean, looks more like black ^^'

And yeah... its not white xD

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I see. Maybe with a drawback? Like I made a BEWD remake once, 3000 atk and had a similar ability but he couldn't attack directly. Then again with his effect I see how it would still be OP so 2400 is good. ^^

 

Since English is not your native language ill help you with the OCG. =]

(I looked it up, the hypen does go there btw.)

 

"You can Tribute Summon this card by offering 1 Zombie-Type monster on your side of the field. Each time this card destroys a Zombie-Type monster in battle and sends it to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card by 400 points."

 

Or if you want it this way, like Red-Eyes Zombie you could make it,

 

"You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position by offering 1 Zombie-Type monster on your side of the field. Each time this card destroys a Zombie-Type monster in battle and sends it to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card by 400 points."

 

I didn't mention the face-up attack position before because I didnt know if you wanted it or not. ^^; Be sure to pay close attention to what is capital and what is not. It confuses me too sometimes. Well there are 2 different ways you could do it. I hope I helped some. =]

[ragnarok1945]

capitalization errors

 

the OCG correction is already up

 

as for the effect, it's too boring because all it does is gain atk. Give it another one

 

5.8/10

[Nightm@re-X]

The card is kinda terrible... boring effect... he's not even BLUE...

4/10

[jayjack]

hoo boy, another zeaux. If it's gonna be a zombie counterpart version of blue-eyes white dragon, it should have the same exactly stats except type. Many ocg errors. Effect isn't the great. pic is good though. 6.5/10

 

OCG FIX

You can Tribute Summon this monster by Tributing 1 Zombie-Type monster. When this card destroys a Zombie-Type monster by battle, this card gains 400 ATK.

[Horologia]

Thanks for honest replays ^^ looks like i really have to improve

 

@ Riryoku-Diachi

Thanks for the OCG Fix dude ^^

 

@Ragnarok

If short ist booring for you, than we got different opinions ^^ i like short and simple effects more than large scale assaults in one card only ^^

 

@Jayjack

Okay, but as i told, a real stats blue eyes would be much to overpowered in my opinion, but now when two guys told me to do it so... well, i think about it ^^

[ProSora]

pic is good, ocg is already up... a lot of errors, effect isnt original but it is good, the only thing wrong with the effect is that it targets zombie monster when it is a zombie, you should have done the opposite like LIGHT or Beast-Type

6/10

[Horologia]

@Prosora

Yeah, i see what you mean (and in my opinion the opposite would be warrior, but whatever ^^) But it´s the same like with red eyes zombie dragon, who also takes controll about other zombies.

 

And watch it from this side, it destroyes other zombies to increase it´s power :P

[Fusion X. Denver]

You can Tribute Summon this card with 1 Zombie-Type monster. This card gains 400 ATK each time it destroys a Zombie-Type monster by battle.

 

hope this helps, awesome pic

[DarkForce™]

way to many spelling and ocg errors. its not even blu, and has no power to suppport zombies or blue eyes. 3/10.

[AfterBurner™]

The only problem I have is it isn't white and doesn't have blue eyes. I'll ease my grammar nazi side but overall it's a good card

 

I did notice the fact of the non existent blue eyes and white dragon part

and dw i'm not that fussed on grammer

8/10

[Horologia]

@Fusion:

Thanks for helping me with my terrible english xD

 

@Dark Force:

Not supporting... but taking advantage of zombies... :P

 

@AfterBurner:

Thanks dude ^^ and me too xD

[Kázàká_Dàrktrë]

The point is being called, a "Zombie Counterpart" is it to be a zombified version of the original card. Since it would hav the LIGHT attribute (element) you're saying it has the same attack. Therefore it should hav 3,000 attack while having 0 defence.

Yes, I know, all high level "Zombie Counterparts" hav a defence but they're all broken unless it makes sense, such as "they keep their armor" which, most of the time, only stays on the creature because it is alive, likewise the armor would fall off, except in cases of "Blue Eyes White Dragon" where its armor would stay on.

 

However, this is a case of "Duel Monsters" vs "Dice Monsters," it is all about the position of the card and NOT at all its attack stat = sending, while defence stat = receiving.

Since the "Blue Eyes White Dragon" is an instinctual beastial dragon monster (creature) it would keep its defence of 2500.

 

Fix your card, please, and do a little research, if possible, or just ask me. The reason why "Zombie Counterparts" is 0 defence is because they were using theta brain waves, like humans do to think, so when they become zombies they lack any ability to defend themselves making their armor, if they had any, worthless. Thus, their defence is eliminated.

 

~Just Read below~

Your Zombie would be a nice addition if it was "Thousand Dragon" which would lose its ability to defend itself just like "Crawling Dragon" did when he became "Dragon Zombie," thus having 0 defence instead of 200.