A Plant-Type Ritual Monster.....?

[Jace Beleren]

[align=center]Yup as the title says

here it is:

 

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Ritual of the Forest". When this card is Ritual Summoned, Special Summon any number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard up to the number of monsters you used for the Ritual Summon. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by card effect, you can add 1 Ritual Spell card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Reflexia, Queen of the Forest". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard. If you do, during this turn, your monster's are Uneffected by the effect of Trap Cards until the End Phase.[/align]

 

 

as usual rate and comment and OCG fix

[Aero~]

I don't see any errors.

9/10

[Spikeball]

Uhoooo, A Plant Ritual!!! Now you mention it: There never was a plant-type monster in real TCG... Like them^^

 

10/10

[Jace Beleren]

Uhoooo' date=' A Plant Ritual!!! Now you mention it: There never was a plant-type monster in real TCG... Like them^^

 

10/10

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Thanx for your ratings and comment

i am glad that you liked it

[AfterBurner™]

No Errors in my eyes i like the picture and the effect it seems rituals are coming back into fasion again

[DarkForce™]

Wrong symbol on the Spell Card. 6/10

[Jace Beleren]

Wrong symbol on the Spell Card. 6/10

 

ok fixed

now rate and comment

[TwilightSoul]

Nice card, it's good to see a Ritual Monster, and nice pic btw

5/5

[DarkForce™]

minor ocg errors. not much originality. 7/10.

[Frybread002]

The correction for the Ritual Card should be

 

your monster(s) is Uneffected by Trap(s) until the End Phase.

 

Also, I didn't know if it was just one monster that's effect by this spell, or all your monsters.

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4/5

[Jace Beleren]

The correction for the Ritual Card should be

 

your monster(s) is Uneffected by Trap(s) until the End Phase.

 

Also' date=' I didn't know if it was just one monster that's effect by this spell, or all your monsters.[hr']

4/5

 

all of my monsters

[TaoSynchro]

wow a plant ritual monster never seen this ritual before awsome effect is a balance 9/10

[RoseSymphony]

lol Suiseiseki, desu~

 

Anyway, I see a few OCG errors. First, you used the wrong symbol on the Spell. .-. Second, the final sentence of the Spell has a few grammar errors, as well as a general OCG error: (correct) "If you do, target 1 monster on your side of the field. That monster is unaffected by Trap cards until the End Phase."

 

Changes: "unaffected" is lowercase, the singular "trap" is changed to the plural "trap cards". Also, you can't just say "your monster is...", because the effect becomes unclear. Do I choose one monster? Does it apply to all of them? You must address these questions and make the card as clear as possible.

 

I'm also noticing some simple grammar errors in the monster, but I'm sure you'll be able to find them if you just read over it a second time. ;)

 

And I remember seeing this picture with the same name but as a Synchro monster. .-. Just thought I'd let you know.

 

Anyway, all of those little OCG errors add up to a final score of 7/10. And fix the Spell card's symbol. D:<

[Jace Beleren]

lol Suiseiseki' date=' desu~

 

Anyway, I see a few OCG errors. First, you used the wrong symbol on the Spell.

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Already Fixed that

 

And I remember seeing this picture with the same name but as a Synchro monster. .-. Just thought I'd let you know.

 

Anyway' date=' all of those little OCG errors add up to a final score of 7/10. And fix the Spell card's symbol. D:<

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also that synchro was made by me

[RoseSymphony]

lol Suiseiseki' date=' desu~

 

Anyway, I see a few OCG errors. First, you used the wrong symbol on the Spell.

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Already Fixed that

 

Okay... so it seems you fixed it while I was typing my post. DX Okay then... just fix whatever is in my post that you haven't already fixed, I guess.

[Jace Beleren]

cmon peoples

i wanna see MOAR comments

[ragnarok1945]

not the first time I've seen Plant rituals

 

it should have an effect while on the field, not just the turn it's summoned and when it's destroyed

 

"When this card is Ritual Summoned, Special Summoned any number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard up to the number of monsters you used for the Ritual Summon." <---and you may need restrictions on the Plant monsters summoned this way

 

8.3/10

[Jace Beleren]

Bump

[shadow wind]

10/10

[Jace Beleren]

bump