Field Barrier Support (My First Cards)

[Birkeland]

Hey peoples. Its my first time actually posting cards instead of watching them. Woo! Prepare for a string of bad OCG, OPed cards, and general stupidity. But that's just what it means to be a fan here, right?

 

I thought I'd start off with Field Barrier support, probably 'cause it's easiest for me to pull off.

The first two pics belong to NathanRosario and the second pic belongs to (or I just got it from) ahcewyy.

 

So 'tatemaru' is japanese for 'shield guy', 'chotatemaru' is japanese for 'super shield guy', and FDWN is for my fake Booster Pack, The Fighting Dawn. Yes, Sacred Field Barrier is based off Tri-Blaze Accelerator; yes, there is no background for Chotatemaru; and yes, I got confused trying to word some of these effects.

 

So please comment, rate, and OCG fix 'cause they really need it.

[ragnarok1945]

for your first cards, the OCG is excellent on all 3 of them

 

except for the capitalization Spell and Trap cards should be Spell and Trap Cards (1st card), everything else looks just fine

 

so for your efforts, I'll give this 9.7/10