Terror of the Deep take 2

[arifpr]

Ok, fixed some ocg, added some cards to the set, and fixed some effects. Again, plz correct my ocg, suggest pics, and rate.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, you could destroy one monster on your oponent's side of the field.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, you could add up to 2 "Abyss" monsters from your Deck to your hand

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. This monster cannot attack unless you discard an "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Any monster that battles this monster is destroyed after damage calculations.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster form your hand to the Graveyard, you could special summon one level 4 or lower "Abyss" monster from the Graveyard. That monster cannot attack, and it is destroyed during the End Phase.

You can Normal Summon this card without a tribute by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, your opponent cannot activate spell or trap cards until their next Standby Phase

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster to the Graveyard, This card could attack your opponent directly. If it does, any battle damage inflicted is halved.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it to your side of the field. If this card is in your Graveyard, you could discard one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard to add this card to your hand

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, by discarding one "Abyss" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, increase this card's level by 2 until the End Phase.

1 "Abyss" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. This card gains 200 ATK for every "Abyss" monster in your Graveyard. During each of your End Phases, return one "Abyss" monster from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 1 card. If it is an "Abyss" monster, you could destroy one monster on the field whose level is lower than or equal to the level of the monster

1 "Abyss" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, you can discard any number of "Abyss" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do, this card gains an additional attack for every card discarded by its effect this Battle Phase

1 "Abyss" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Once per turn, you can discard any number of "Abyss" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy the same number of cards on the field up to twice the number of cards discarded by this card's effect.

[GhostTrail]

how do u make artwork like this?

[ragnarok1945]

tribute should be Tribute

 

other than that, the OCG is very impressive

 

Hunter, Leviathan need more effects though

 

8/10

[Specter54]

I still think the cards could use some work. Better than last time, but I've got an idea on how to word the Abyss Set.

Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. During either player's Main Phase, you can discard one "Abyss" monster from your hand. If you do so...

Special Summon, Draw two cards, add two "Abyss" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand, etc.

 

8/10

(pics too)

[Tormented]

Instead of creating an intire new post edit your old...

 

and also the cards need some big improvments Image wise try to find ones that look Epic! and spot on.....

 

Ocg is better then what it was from what I can gather so 7/10

 

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