More Zombies....

[Horologia]

Okay, lets have a look on these...

(Zombies are my favorite... :P)

 

Zombie Dragonov:

Pic:

Dont look zombie- or card-like and in my opinion to many things there

(4/10)

 

Effect:

Well... its not really a improvment for a zombie deck, cause if you really want to use this card you would have to add some dragons. Dragons and zombies dont really like each other, and once you play "Zombie World" (wich each good zombieplayer should have ;)) Also your Dragons are zombies.

The other effects are nice, especially the "destroy monster" part ^^, but ending a Battle Phase by offering this card would be madness!!! xD

(7/10)

 

Balance:

I hate Synchros, but i try to rate it fair...

Synchros always have such effects, but your drawback with the "if no zombies in graveyard" is okay i think, i would have made it harder like "if there are not at least 4 zombies in graveyard" or somehting like that. But 3000 for a Level 8 is okay ^^

(7/10)

 

Summary:

Well, i´ve seen better cards, but for a starter they are okay ;)

 

 

 

Tormentor of the Grave´s

Pic:

Again, dont look yugioh´ish but i like it ^^

(5/10)

 

Effect:

Well... how many Level 10 zombies are there in in Yugioh? >_<

this trick wont even work with another of this card, cause of the "only be Special Summoned by returning 5 removed from play Zombie-Type monsters" clause... Im sorry, but this is a fail

(0/10)

 

Balancing:

Maybe underpowered... its hard to get 5 zombies monsters removed from play in a normal zombie deck, and only 2500 is not that much... but better under than overpowered ;)

(6/10)

 

Summary:

Aww dude... change the effect ^^"

 

 

Well, you are creative and thats good... but even better is you´re not one of the kind who tries to create some Ultimate God-card-fusions or nonsene like this ^^

Try again, im sure you will be a good card maker in time ;)

 

 

((Im not rating OCG, cause im Austrian and as such really bad in english xD))

[ragnarok1945]

graveyard should be Graveyard (1st card)

 

the rest of the OCG is fine, though for the 2nd card's lv10 or adding zombie monster won't be used much

 

8/10

[Ultimate HotIce]

thanks

 

@ horologia - thanks and can see where you are coming from

[NightGuardian1764]

Wow, Great OCG and pics, only that they aren't many Level 10 Zombie monster card.

Anyway, 9/10