Necro Pheonix Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 The thunder roars on deaf earsThe evening rain falls on pail skinThe winds of change blow through the treesThings can never be the same again.Change is not always for the betterChange doesnt always healAt the end of the tunnel,At the end of the stormThere is a light that shines throughThe light that shows the wayThe light that brakes the darknessThe light that dries the tearsThe light that flashes through the skyThe light that clears the stormIt truly is, the Sweet Lightning. The flash that roars through the skyThe crack the breaks the endless silenceThe empty road is empty no moreThe empty road is full of hopeHope that fuels all it touchesHope that saves the lives of manyHope that cures the disease of hateIt truly is, the Sweet Lightning The radiance that extinguishes the flames of evilThe glow that warms the hearts of all it greetsThe beam of justice that lights the wayThe illumination for those in the darknessThe thunder is heard,but the lightning is seenThe calm before the storm,and the storm before the endThe storm brings the rain that brings lifeThe storm brings winds that brings change.The storm brings the lightning that shows the world its face.It truly is, the Sweet Lightning. This was written for Sweet Lightning, who's birthda is in a couple days and he just recently left YCM. Yes, I know it doesn't rhyme, I didnt want it to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 May I ask what it is about? Because so far the weather is not fantastic here either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 I read the first sentence and I got extremely excited and happy. I expected a poem on contrasting views, like the deaf hearing and the blind seeing with a metaphoric standpoint and a moral tied in the entire poem. But it was alright. Some poor word choice here and there, but I like it. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 I wrote it for Sweet Lightning, so I used Lightning as a symbol for a storm. Whoah, DARK likes my poem! Now, then it must be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twistedchild101 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 I approve of that poem!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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