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This is pretty good. My complaints are minor:

 

-"shuffle" in the last sentence of the Lore should be capitalized, and "attack" in the first sentence should be capitalized as well.

 

-Shadow looks pretty small compared to the background, but that's fine if that was the only photo you could find.

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