Squirrel Girl Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Here it is: Lore:This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. You can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. During each of your Main Phases, increase this cards Level by 1 (max 10). This card gains ATK and DEF equal to it's Level x 400. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 "Dark Magician Girl" from your Deck to your hand. Image credit to Wanderley What you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikatsui Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Looks good to meMaybe make it a Tuner?9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 It won't be a Tuner and Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 tribute should be Tribute "You can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls." <---this effect should be limited to once per turn, or it'll get OPed 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Thanks for the help and comment and rate ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 This reminded me of Fortune Ladies,which is my fav. archetype :D Effect seems pretty good,change that destroy s/t to once per turn as someone said before. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I wont since you lose 1 monster each time you use the effect. I made this card too looks like FL. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 True. So I guess it balances out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 It does since you get rid of a monster while your opponent get rid of a Spell/Trap. That's to high cost actually, It would be more balanced if you destroy a Spell/Trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 It's wayyy to O'PED, it can have 4000 ATK, Attack your opponent, and then you can Tribute a card to stop your opponent from playing a smashing ground or hammer shot, and its not even affected by Trap cards.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like it AquaMaster. I'm a big time Dark Magician user and I have to say that it looks really good. Although Adogadog8 is right I'm afraid. I believe that if you make the max level it can have lower like lets say, I don't know, 6 or 7 then maybe it would be a little more balanced out. But other that that, nice card, and pic too. 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I give this card a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Good and love it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gawd of Spell Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Um.. nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I like it AquaMaster. I'm a big time Dark Magician user and I have to say that it looks really good. Although Adogadog8 is right I'm afraid. I believe that if you make the max level it can have lower like lets say' date=' I don't know, 6 or 7 then maybe it would be a little more balanced out. But other that that, nice card, and pic too. 9.1/10[/quote'] If max level is 6 or 7 it would be OPed but not if it can be a level 10! The effect fit's for a level 10 monster not for a 7 it's to OPed for just level 7 Thanks everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Good. I think i saw a few OCG errors but good. 10-10 cuz i love dark magician and DM girl 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 It looks all right, but the name is not OCG, it would be best to use Young Dark Magician Girl. And fix its effect it should be This card is unaffected by any Trap Cards. once per turn you can destroy 1 Monster card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect this card cannot attack during this turn. During each of your Main Phases, increase this cards Level by 1 (max 10). This card gains ATK and DEF equal to it's Level x 400. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can add 1 "Dark Magician Girl" from your Deck to your hand your deck is then shuffled. Removing a spell/trap card is to OP because its unaffected by trap cards anyways. Its max ATK and deff is 4400 because its already at 1 star and 10+1=11 and 11X400=4400 anyways I would rate it 9.9/10, perfect for a spellcaster/Dark Magician Deck. I would use it if it where real Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 The name cant have ocg errors. The effect is not destroy a monster your opponent controls it's a Spell/Trap card and it can be used 4 times a turn. It's still not OPed even if you can destroy 4 Spell/Trap Cards, since you lose a monster for each card destroyed. Plus your opponent may have some monsters who would kick this cards butt. This card can attack if you use this cards effect. But thanks for rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 It looks all right' date=' but the name is not OCG, it would be best to use Young Dark Magician Girl. And fix its effect it should be This card is unaffected by any Trap Cards. once per turn you can destroy 1 Monster card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect this card cannot attack during this turn. During each of your Main Phases, increase this cards Level by 1 (max 10). This card gains ATK and DEF equal to it's Level x 400. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can add 1 "Dark Magician Girl" from your Deck to your hand your deck is then shuffled. Removing a spell/trap card is to OP because its unaffected by trap cards anyways. Its max ATK and deff is 4400 because its already at 1 star and 10+1=11 and 11X400=4400 anyways I would rate it 9.9/10, perfect for a spellcaster/Dark Magician Deck. I would use it if it where real[/quote'] yep change the name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 No i wont change the name! I like it so just shut up before i kill you in a figget! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Fortune Lady Dark Magic? :p9/10 The increasing of level should be during the Standby Phases. Searching DMG to hand is probably not all that useful, maybe another effect would be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
friskywhiskers Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 It's really realistic! Not such a graet pic though... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 frisykwhiskers! wdf the pic is fabulous and plus Young Dark Magician Girl is the correct OCG for yu-gi-oh if you actually wanted it to be realistic you would want the name to be realistic too wouldn't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 frisykwhiskers! wdf the pic is fabulous and plus Young Dark Magician Girl is the correct OCG for yu-gi-oh if you actually wanted it to be realistic you would want the name to be realistic too wouldn't you? She/He can have the name however they want it it's fine how it is good card BTW love the Picture <(^^)> hug for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Thanks all. The name cant have OCG errors just realize that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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