Some Poetry

[Ecoboy1324]

My Inspiration If I Forget by Cassie A. Thiel

 

If I forget to tell you just how much you mean to me, I hope that you will remember while your not here with me.

If I forget to tell you that you are my world and more, I hope that you will remember what I am waiting for.

If I forget to tell you I want you in my life, I hope that you will remember that I am always by your side.

If I forget to tell you I love you more than words, I hope that you will remember regardless of the hurt.

If I forget to tell you I am sorry for my mistakes, I hope that you will remember with every one I make.

If I forget to tell you no other can compare, I hope that you will remember the love that we both share.

If I forget to tell you I miss you everyday, I hope that you will remember your absence causes pain.

If I forget to tell you that forever is what I want, I hope you will remember that forever is what we have got. Whether I say these words to you, or wait until you are here with me, I will show you this forever, and these words will have no need.

 

 

 

 

 

My Interpretation

 

To my love

Be not afraid

let us take this walk Together

Take my hand and walk with me

Let me be your guide

 

To my love

Let me in

Share with me Your problems Your concerns

Your hopes and dreams

Let me be a friend a confidone

Know that your safe with me

Know that you will be warm with me

let me be your guide

 

To my love

Let me be the one who makes you laugh

Let me be the shoulder to cry on

let me be the light and the love

The heart and the soul

The one you depend on

Let me be your guide

[Zimiri of the Muse]

i like it

[Ea...Lord of the Depths]

Awful.

[Ecoboy1324]

Awful.

 

Care to elaborate or are you just going to troll my poetry

[Juuzou]

I stopped reading at 'Some Poetry'

[Ecoboy1324]

I stopped reading at 'Some Poetry'

 

Why even post at all then?

[Ea...Lord of the Depths]

Awful.

 

Care to elaborate or are you just going to troll my poetry

 

This 'poetry' is generic, hackneyed, underdeveloped, poorly thought-out, uninteresting, lacking in entertainment value, and so overdone.

[Yasu]

OBJECTION!

http://simplysomali.com/Simply/viewtopic.php?t=4703

;_;

[Ecoboy1324]

OBJECTION!

http://simplysomali.com/Simply/viewtopic.php?t=4703

Rip?

 

I never said that i wrote the top one.

i just wrote my interpretation at the bottom. Just never knew who wrote the top.

Thanks though ill give her credit right now

[Ea...Lord of the Depths]

Wow, you couldn't even make up your own horrible crap?

[Yasu]

OBJECTION!

http://simplysomali.com/Simply/viewtopic.php?t=4703

Rip?

 

I never said that i wrote the top one.

i just wrote my interpretation at the bottom. Just never knew who wrote the top.

Thanks though ill give her credit right now

 

Oh D:

Ok... ;_;