~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Mr. Frog Hippity hoppity, down the logHer comes that old Mr. Frog!You can see him, through the fogThis is where he stays, his own bog Ribbit ribbit, he does sayThis is what he does everydaySomeday I’ll get him, make him payFor the thing he did in such a way Mr. Frog tricked my sister with fine printShe is now forever his very own servantForced to work for one as vile as a serpentFate was cruel, allowing her to be taken by a tyrant However, I regained the hope that had once wentFor by killing the foul amphibian I can make a dentAnd break the curse that my passion has bentI leave Hero’s Apartment, having paid the last rent As I reach the bog the ghastly fog does fadeRevealing a being, small and deadly as a grenadeHe donned a top hat, which his slaves had madeKnowing what’s to come I unsheathe my blade “Foolish mortal, you truly do amuse meI say this all with complete honesty!The difference between us is easy to seeI can vanquish you oh so very easily!” His serpentine tongue ensnares my armMr. Frog preps his teeth, ready to do harmMy life is a blurr…am I back with Bess on the farm?There’s no time to dawdle, I must break this charm! I shove my free hand forward whilst it clenches my saberThere’s no time to think, may I have the seven god’s favorThe time has come to punish him for my sister’s forced laborWith the divine sword known by name as the Frog SlayerThe epic battle was then engulfed in a burst of lightDespite the fact that the conflict took place during nightMr. Frog screamed as he disintegrated, thus ending the fightI place my blade inside the unholy log, knowing I had done right Enslaved humans, freed from the curse, rejoiced and praised me as if I were a heroUpon the frog’s death, legal documents he had of any meaning tallied up to zeroBess embraces me and tears stream down her eyes as she preens my afroShe then set fire to the forest and all who dwelled in it, reminding me she was a pyroManiac Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Very deep. I enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 This is hard to read while listening to Metallica :| I guess it's good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 pretty good, i usually don't enjoy many forms of poetry but this was nice awesome battle sceney, poetry doesn't always have to rhyme though. I'm pretty sure you already know that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 STOP TROLLING ME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I fully identify myself with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I fully identify myself with it.I must now RAEP U D< I enjoyed reading the poem, it's good *thumbs-up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 STOP TROLLING ME I'm not. I fully see an allegory for Jesus in this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 You tried too hard with the rhyming. But I still love it. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I SWEAR TO GOD TROLL ME MORE AN ILL NEG YOU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 lol a neg im so scard plz dun neg me mastar atlus srry i dun liek ur poam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 YES…YES, FEAR ME YOU FOOL. FEAR ME. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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