DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 The train A train flies high, Into the sky,And hears a crackAs it has no track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Nice flow and creativity, but It seems it could be longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Nice flow and creativity' date=' but It seems it could be longer.[/quote'] This but needs to be much longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Well, I decided to make it simple ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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