Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Here is my attempt to create a balanced monster that has 9000 ATK! (ZOMG It's over 9000! O.O *DBZ Abridged Reference*) It has a ton of effects that are used to balance it out. I feel like it has some OCG errors so if someone would kindly help me fix them it would be great. ^^ (May even give Rep.) If you still think this card is OP or even UP then tell me and I will adjust as necessary. =D So yesh, here is my card! TO ALL THE PEOPLE MENTIONING SKILL DRAIN THIS CARD'S EFFECTS CANNOT BE NEGATED!!!! Just wanted to clear this up! =D [spoiler=Homonculus Dragon]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 FIRE, WIND, WATER, and EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play and paying 2000 Life Points. This monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly or change its Battle Position except by this card's effect. This monster's effects cannot be negated. Any equip cards that are equipped to this card are instantly destroyed. All battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points are halved. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. This card's Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WIND, and WATER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Nice try, but Skill Drain says hi. I don't know many decks that run that many Attributes, so it's conditions are good enough atleast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon16 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 It kind of over power but it is good card but lower the atk points then it will be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 the attributes need to be ALL capitalized personally if you had said the card effect can't be negated by Skill Drain, that would make it just fine 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Nice try' date=' but Skill Drain says hi. I don't know many decks that run that many Attributes, so it's conditions are good enough atleast.[/quote'] Edited so that its effect cannot be negated. I forgot about that part. ^^ EDIT: Just did ragnarok, along with increasing LP needed to summon. Ill edit Attributes now. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 some effects coincide with each other quite well while others dont mix, specifically the battle positions one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 some effects coincide with each other quite well while others dont mix' date=' specifically the battle positions one.[/quote'] Thats on purpose. Once he goes to DEF he STAYS in DEF. The ultimate weakness of a monster with 9000 ATK but 0 DEF points. He lets off one good shot and then his reign is over. ^^ EDIT: I see what you mean. Ill edit it so it says it only can change its position by its own effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gawd of Spell Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 OCG DEF=DefenseMode=Position8/10;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 FIRE, WIND, WATER, and EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play and paying 2000 Life Points. This monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly or change its Battle Position except by this card's effect. This monster's effects cannot be negated. Any equip cards that are equipped to this card are instantly destroyed. All battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points are halved. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. This card's Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WIND, and WATER. Well, I'd say it is quite OP'ed, I mean this may not work but what if someone were to play Skill Drain (i.e. the owner of "Homonculus Dragon") before it's summoning? Well, I guess it's unique and so for that I'll give it a B. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 FIRE' date=' WIND, WATER, and EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play and paying 2000 Life Points. This monster cannot attack your oppone[b']nt's[/b] Life Points directly or change its Battle Position except by this card's effect. This monster's effects cannot be negated. Any equip cards that are equipped to this card are instantly destroyed. All battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points are halved. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. This card's Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WIND, and WATER. Well, I'd say it is quite OP'ed, I mean this may not work but what if someone were to play Skill Drain (i.e. the owner of "Homonculus Dragon") before it's summoning? Well, I guess it's unique and so for that I'll give it a B. Hmm didn't think about if it was used before... =/ Then it could just be normal summoned... I'll have to think about that one. Like you said though, Im still not sure if it would work or not though. Thanks for OCG corrections. Card updated. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I read all the effects, although it does seem to balance its overall effectiveness, I'm just not feeling a card with a printed ATK higher than 5000. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
friskywhiskers Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 the attributes need to be ALL capitalized personally if you had said the card effect can't be negated by Skill Drain' date=' that would make it just fine 8.4/10[/quote']Omg! who cares about grammer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 the attributes need to be ALL capitalized personally if you had said the card effect can't be negated by Skill Drain' date=' that would make it just fine 8.4/10[/quote']Omg! who cares about grammer! Hey man cool down. ^^; It's the OCG and I thank him for pointing it out to me. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 it is balanced out xD, its also up o.o since it can only attack once.....8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I wouldn't call any monster with 9000 ATK Underpowered lol cause if it got 2 shots off that could be game. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 hmmm its seems to be in the clear 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Wait, what card effect changing his Battle Position? APart from that, it's good. Owait, no card has ATK higher than 5000, unless by card effect or '?' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightGuardian1764 Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Uh, that monster won't last long as it turn into Defense Position after it attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lomanikoro Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Skill drain would kill that. Very nice card though :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Doncha think that's what we need in a Skill Drain Deck? Owait, it can't be negated... [spoiler=Hiita would like to eff you. Here's another card that makes this kool.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack kenna Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 ok i do like this card but all it takes is a skill drain and it becomes a card used in every deck.but very good try if there was no such thing as skill drain i would of given this card a 9/10 but there is so 7.5/10 nice try cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 How I would type the OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 FIRE, WIND, WATER, and EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play and paying 2000 Life Points. This monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly or change its Battle Position except by this card's effect. This monster's effects cannot be negated. If this card is equipped, instantly destroy the equipped card. All Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points is halved. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. This card's Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WIND, and WATER. Just a minor fix, mind you. Pretty solid work, but this has been done before. I like the image. G. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 The effect isn't bad isn't good.The pic is fine.OCG few errors Not really balanced IMO. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riryoku-Diachi Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 For everyone who has mentioned Skill Drain ITS EFFECTS CANNOT BE NEGATED!!!!!!!!!!!! Just wanted to put that out there because so many people have mentioned it. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Lol, this reminds me of a card I once made with 8000 ATK. (It was ballanced though). Pic is ok.Effect is restricting, what is needed to keep this card from OPing. Would OTK with the card showed (Last post of prev page).A 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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