Frunk Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Roses are red,Violets are blue,I believe that it's absolutely frightfully silly and absurd to discuss poetry on such a trivial site,What about you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Sure, it's a great way to express yourself, but I don't need someone's life story instilled in it.Cant there be a section for this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thesius Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Way better than the other poems on this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikatsui Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Best. Poem. Evar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Now that I think of it, your poem has been the least depressing I've seen on the site, Frunk.Good show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Now that I think of it' date=' your poem has been the least depressing I've seen on the site, Frunk.Good show.[/quote'] Thanks, I really attribute the upbeat-ness of the piece to the floral references used within the first and only stanza. They also hide my obvious pompousness, being a poet and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Needs more unicorns and butterflies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 How could I not have seen that?! Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Win. So much win, I've just gone blind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 It's too long :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 It's too long :|What is you talking about. ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Your meter is off. The third line is too short; make it longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Your meter is off. The third line is too short; make it longer. No sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Your meter is off. The third line is too short; make it longer. Agreed. Fixed. Thanks for all the comments guys!!! This is really helping my low self-esteem and fuelling my gargantuan ego!!! :D :D :D :D 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Your meter is off. The third line is too short; make it longer. lolRag. Actually reminds me to share my poems with YCM... Maybe not lol. I do agree.... As long as it asks people not to make Poems its OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I cried manly tears.The emotion is incredible.I especially liked how it slowly moves to the ending after becoming incredibly exciting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Yeah, YCM isn't a poetry forum. That's why all my poems are for the lulz, to mock the others who actualy fr srs post poetry on YCM. <_< hay frunk ur poem sux0rz haha cant ban me cuz i got supapowah hahahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 You forgot the leprachauns and rainbow pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 With the addition of unicorns and rainbows, this is officially the best poem on YCM. And possibly the internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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