Atmosphere Soldier #1

[Max.]

This Card Cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card can only be summoned by Removing 2 or more Warrior-Type monsters from Play.During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.This card loses 200 DEF each time it Attacks.When this card has 0 DEF Destroy this card.When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent,Remove 1 Warrior-Type monster from Play.

[♠Decietful King♠]

OCG Fix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 2 or more Warrior-Type monsters from Play. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Decrease this card's DEF by 200 each time it declares an attack. When this card's DEF reaches 0, destroy it. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, remove from play 1 Warrior-Type monster.

 

You can use the fix if you wish. And well seeing how this card doesn't gain ATK then half of its effect won't happen. The pic is alright (IMO), OCG wasn't bad just the wrong wording.

 

My Rate ~7/10~

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG correction is already up, so I'll just move to the effects part

 

"When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent,Remove 1 Warrior-Type monster from Play." <----you need to say WHERE you're removing from play that warrior-type monster

 

7/10